first look

[denkiva]

So 4 days after I finished the first story, I read it through, without stopping, from start to finish, quite unsure what I would find. All in all, it's OK. Not great, but salvageable with enough editing. I say it's at 50%. After i finished, I made 2 pages of notes about what needed to be fleshed out, edited down, re-parsed, removed and the random

Comments

前向き！

[pinkylequin]

remember 10 years from now no rediting! we dont want to pull a you know who! now is the time to edit!

Re: 前向き！

[denkiva]

oddly enough I just ordered the RE EDITED copy of her original trilogy! I'm really interested to see what she thinks she needed to redo... yes yes! the editing starts tomorrow! it's officially been a week since I finished so it's safe to start again on it.

Re: 前向き！

[pinkylequin]

omg! your going to brave it and read the re-written work!!

Re: 前向き！

[denkiva]

yeah, it seems I am... her whole rewritten trilogy no less!!! I'll let you know if it's an improvement or not... It has been quite a few years since I read the original trilogy... I think I've read it about 3 times already...