What a lovely piece, Deni! Neji and Sakura make a gorgeous couple, with gorgeously gorgeous descriptions. I'd love to see more of how Sakura might integrate herself with clan life, or see more of how Neji and Sakura might interact, how you explore this couple in general. Or maybe throw in some Kakashi/Sakura rival pairing on the side, in which there is much confusion and jealously and sexiness. Or...
Heck, Deni. I think I just need more of your writing.
Thanks clear! ♥ *huggles* I've missed seeing you around!
I kind of like the idea of Neji and Sakura with a side of Kakashi and Sakura, couple angst or sneaky threesome compromises or.... something... maybe once I knock out some more of the Kage System... so tempting :)
Oh sure. I don't mean to be scarce around these parts, especially when there's so many intriguing things going on, but life just has a funny way of getting in the way sometimes, doesn't it? (^///^)
I think couple angst between Neji and Sakura with a confident and egotistical Kakashi swooping in out of nowhere would be fun. Just the idea of a guilty and befuddled Sakura dealing with the sudden turn of events (is she cheating or not? Does it count if your ex-sensei suddenly appears out of nowhere and turns your mind to mush by giving you a quick romp in the hospital closet?), and Kakashi presenting a suitable challenge against the well established Neji's seductive awesomeness would just be all sorts of asdjfjkl;asl;dkg!! Poor Sakura wouldn't know where to turn next when caught up between her affairs, but oh... what a happy problem.
There are probably plenty of readers on the edge of their seats for the next Kage System update, but if you ever get the chance to play with this sandbox again it would be all sorts of intriguing. XD
Oh, I hear ya. I just had to huggle you and let you know you've been missed :D
Dang it, clear! You've got all these scenarios running around in my head now - not much help when I have a final paper to write lol. But oooohhh I'm so itching to write some more now.
Eh I haven't really given much for that story yet; not even chapter one is done, but it's a WIP - and the Progress part is all that's important to me right now, no matter how slow it may be coming.
But yes, I will *definitely* have to get to some Neji/Sakura/Kakashi goodness
I feel like Sakura could just be shipped with just about anyone. I'm usually happy to read anything Sakura x Something, or Kakashi x Something, but KakaSaku is just chocolate to me. Soooo good. =p
I don't mind Neji. I don't think about him too much, but I enjoyed this small snippet. No doubt he should have some talented fingers, hehe. ^_^
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What a lovely piece, Deni! Neji and Sakura make a gorgeous couple, with gorgeously gorgeous descriptions. I'd love to see more of how Sakura might integrate herself with clan life, or see more of how Neji and Sakura might interact, how you explore this couple in general. Or maybe throw in some Kakashi/Sakura rival pairing on the side, in which there is much confusion and jealously and sexiness. Or...
Heck, Deni. I think I just need more of your writing.
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I kind of like the idea of Neji and Sakura with a side of Kakashi and Sakura, couple angst or sneaky threesome compromises or.... something... maybe once I knock out some more of the Kage System... so tempting :)
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I think couple angst between Neji and Sakura with a confident and egotistical Kakashi swooping in out of nowhere would be fun. Just the idea of a guilty and befuddled Sakura dealing with the sudden turn of events (is she cheating or not? Does it count if your ex-sensei suddenly appears out of nowhere and turns your mind to mush by giving you a quick romp in the hospital closet?), and Kakashi presenting a suitable challenge against the well established Neji's seductive awesomeness would just be all sorts of asdjfjkl;asl;dkg!! Poor Sakura wouldn't know where to turn next when caught up between her affairs, but oh... what a happy problem.
There are probably plenty of readers on the edge of their seats for the next Kage System update, but if you ever get the chance to play with this sandbox again it would be all sorts of intriguing. XD
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Dang it, clear! You've got all these scenarios running around in my head now - not much help when I have a final paper to write lol. But oooohhh I'm so itching to write some more now.
Eh I haven't really given much for that story yet; not even chapter one is done, but it's a WIP - and the Progress part is all that's important to me right now, no matter how slow it may be coming.
But yes, I will *definitely* have to get to some Neji/Sakura/Kakashi goodness
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(Along with KakaSaku. And ItaSaku. And GaaSaku.
. . .I'll shut up now.)
Lovely piece, Deni! I'd love to see more of this! A vivid memory in the shower, indeed! ;D
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I'm not opposed to getting into some Neji x Sakura.
I'm glad you liked it <3
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Hohgod I love Neji's hair....
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I don't mind Neji. I don't think about him too much, but I enjoyed this small snippet. No doubt he should have some talented fingers, hehe. ^_^
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But I love shipping them with others, too.
Sometimes I think Neji doesn't get enough love, and he should totally get some fluffy love - and some hot smexin.
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