haiku

[dendroidman]

hey guys, sorry i haven't been around too much. but i have been reading your guys's stuff as much as i can though. I have been really busy with college again this semester. any way i am in a creative wrighting class and i wanted some of your guys's feed on the stuff. for starters here are some haiku's that i did. please let me know

Comments

[iskander9999]

I like them :) the second and fourth are the best, I think.

Hey, is your phone number still the same? I was going to give you a call today but wasn't sure which number to call (your house or cell) and what time would be best.

[dendroidman]

thank you. :) i have tried to call you a few times actually. you never pick up. and house im good for a call any time after 6:00 and befour midnight. as for during the day thats when the cell is on. :) give me a ring some time ::hug::

[wirrrn]

Welcome back!

[dendroidman]

lol thanks. thats a magic card isn't it?

[aelindel]

Hey buddy. Sounds like we have both been away, just that you got back sooner than I did. I am sure you know how it goes, to much modern technology is not good for the Fae and every so often we seem to adjure the lot of it. Still, one can not live in an igloo for too long and it saddens me to admit that this world in which we live has made it necessary to be reliant upon these tools of modern technology and so I have returned; to once again drown in the inrush of existance.

Like your Haiku although there is a lot of dark undertones there. Little preoccupied with the moribund are we?

*hugs*

Have missed you too.

Love

Aelin

[dendroidman]

yea it hits me pretty quick. if i dont' go outside all day i start to get headaches. ::Hug:: yea i been pretty busy with school this semester. i went back on full load, after a semester of half. (i was trying to find a job) and as for my haiku lol. well maby. but only because i didn't have my elf friend to inspire and uplift my thoughts for the happier haiku moments. ;) and im just normally a we bit morbid. he he he ::Hug::