Invisible [Part 2]

[denden143]

Title: Invisible
Pairing: Main!Kyusung, Side!Kyumin, Eventual!Minwook
Genre: Romance, Angst, Drama, Minor!Fluff
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I wish I own them but I don't.
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Comments

Thank You~

[nytslyer03]

ate den! why you make me cry??
i can totally relate to this, although i wasn't with my best friend. maybe i'll write a fic about it and i'll have you read it. but of course not too soon. XD

the flashback hurt me the most. *sigh* i...
nevermind.

this is angst enough for me. i suppose the good ending gave me a vibe that everything would eventually turn out well, unexpected even.
what i'm trying to say is, thank you for this. it inspired me and taught me a life lesson. not being exaggerated or dramatic or anything cause i'm telling the truth.

Only with acceptance there can be recovery
i agree with this one. you have a lot of quotable phrases there and i commend you for that.

this has now became my favorite fic of yours. it's no longer now that you're gone. more fics from you please? XD

love you ate den! Happy New year!

Re: Thank You~

[nytslyer03]

oops. wrong. it was supposed to be he wasn't in love with my best friend.. harhar. although my bestie likes his brother. XD

Re: Thank You~

[denden143]

Awww!! Im sad that it made you cry :(( Im thankful you can relate to this story,,it means you understand the general emotion of this fic :D

That flashback is what took the most time to write,,,its supposed to be just a short scene but I end up dragging it for so long...made me so tired :(

I think the good ending ruined the mood of the fic...but I realized a sad fic as a present won't be good xDDD!! So it became like that :D Im happy it taught you something~

That quote is taken from my most favorite series of all time....Harry Potter!! I love that quote,,it held so much wisdom :D I spent lots of time researching it,,worth all the effort :D

Awww!! Thank you!! truth is,,this is actually my personal favorite among my works :D

Love you more Ron!! Have a happy 2012!!

Re: Thank You~

[nytslyer03]

yes it did made me cry. the flashbacks are okay since they told most of the story between kyu and yesung. it would be the hardest to write because that's where the story revolved in my opinion. plus, the amount of angst you put in that confession dealt with a lot of emotions. I Miss You and Let's Not managed to drain my brain. XD

never read an HP book before but i guess that was why the quote was meaningful. hehehe..

it has a resemblance in your life so that's why you cherish it the most among your fanfics. thank you for sharing this ate den!!

haba ng comment ko oh~!!!

[neyaays]

This is so good. I love it. I have the exact same experience in which the boy whom I loved gave his heart to my best friend :(

So I really can feel the emotion of this story. I'm happy that Kyusung's love ends happily, unlike mine :(
*sad*,,,,, *sad*

[denden143]

Awww!! Thanks for loving this!! Im sad you had an experience like this :(( like jongwoon...like me :(

I hope you got over it as I did..hope the both of us can find our own happiness the same way Kyu and Jongwoon did :D

[phoenix_soar]

I think this is the fic you've written most beautifully so far... Perhaps it is because you can relate to Jongwoon's feelings here - though that is sad to know ;-; - but I really love how you define love, especially unrequited love. And how you describe the best way to recovery is acceptance. There are so many beautiful phrases and sentences I want to quote, but I think I'll end up quoting the whole fic. Gosh, this was just GORGEOUS, Den O.o

[nytslyer03]

wow arvy~!
are you challenging the fic with your comment? this is LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG!!! hahaha.. XD

[phoenix_soar]

... yes. Why, yes I am. LOL XDDDDD kidding kidding haha
Oh, but I'm beginning to think that maybe I should have kept it a bit short xD I think the sheer length of my comment scared Den off from replying to me ^^; SORRY DEN!!!

[nytslyer03]

LOL. I don't think you scared her that much. she must've been trying to level with your novel-like comment.

it's hard to compress your opinion. I should know because I've done that once and it felt incomplete, more so, it didn't make sense.

and wait a minute, why are we talking here on her fanfic anyway?? we are so weird. =.=

[sujulovenl]

What is this? No spot for me?:o *eats you*

I'll read and comment when I have time ^^

[denden143]

Im sorry Bia!! My connection was crappy,,didn't had time to spot anyone except Rhen and Helene >.<

I'll wait for that :D

[babycloudy]

THIS IS AWEEEEEEEEEEEE(MUCH) not awe(some) !!!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

seriously, I love this long story of your ! LOVE IT !
but, well actually I was hoping for more *cough* sad *cough* ending though, like the way Kyuhyun will regret since you usually made Kyuhyun who was on regret or pain at the end of your oneshot stories... err, just ignore that comment of mine! lol but I love this!

Happy New Year for you anyway ^^~

[denden143]

LOL baby!! Good play with the words there xDD!!

Awwww!! Im happy you love this :)))

LMAO!! I seem to have made an image of making my character suffer...this was actually supposed to have a sad ending,,the usual things I did,,sad, painful, full of regrets...but Rhen forced me to have a happy ending so.......it became like that :D

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO BABY!!!
(just curious,,how many times did you edit this comment??? xDDD!)

[babycloudy]

Rhen is always be the one who loves fluffy between us, which is precious much ♥ \o/

you want to know how much? maybe more than 3times? = =" take the blame with my phone, I don't even finish writing it had already posted ! askdjhwoieqpfnjsdbcvaaslkdjb = =" I wish my phone will kind enough to wait for me to finish typing *-*

waiting for your next stor(ies), lol :]

[denden143]

Yeah,,her fixation on fluffs is really fascinating..while the two of us is more on angst :D

LOL!! Impatient phone much?? Next time it should really wait for you to finish first :D

I'll try to make more..but I gotta concentrate on LtLB now :D