Comments | demonqueen666: Thor Fic: "Kill all the pretty lies" (Darcy, Loki, PG-13), 9/10

demonqueen666

Thor Fic: "Kill all the pretty lies" (Darcy, Loki, PG-13), 9/10

Aug 16, 2011 11:13

This slight delay in posting brought to you by 1) the artist being out of town for a week, and 2) my internet deciding the weekend was a good time to go on strike. Oy. However, the good news is this chapter is so long it has to be split into two lj posts...and since I knew that was going to happen ahead of time, that means you get two pretty ( Read more... )

fantasy, mythology, fanfic, thor

Comments 8

dr_funbags August 16 2011, 22:36:14 UTC

Loved the fight scenes - so very easy to picture in my head with how well you write them! Also, hello douchebag Loki, ugh. Hope he comes to his senses in the next chapter?

demonqueen666 August 16 2011, 23:08:40 UTC

Well, guess you'll just have to wait and see! (You did read all of this chapter, right? I only wonder, since you left the comment on the first post.)

dr_funbags August 17 2011, 02:33:17 UTC

O.o. Whoa, I did SO not see that "CONTINUE" there - maybe you can bold it? Or make it a bit bigger? The layout at first glance, makes it seem like it could be part of the tags section or something. I probably would have never known had you not pointed that out!

OFF TO READ THE REST!

demonqueen666 August 17 2011, 03:01:32 UTC

I mentioned it was going to be a split post in the header, though. But I might change the format anyway, I'll see what I can do.

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perletwo August 16 2011, 23:46:32 UTC

Oh, poor Darcy. She's losing friends right and left. *wibbles*

demonqueen666 August 17 2011, 03:03:07 UTC

I wish I could say it gets better for her by the end of this chapter, but well...it so, so doesn't.