Dollhouse Fic: "Fives Times He Realized" (Dominic, R)

[demonqueen666]

Title: Five Times He Realized
Characters/Pairings: Dominic, Topher, Claire, Madeline, Echo, DeWitt, Victor, Sierra, mention of Ballard; Dominic/DeWitt, Victor/Sierra and mention of Madeline/Ballard
Rating: R for sex, language, various innuendos
Length: 3,130 words
Spoilers: first season
Notes: part of Waking 'verse
Summary: Five times Laurence

Comments

[demonqueen666]

I'm a huge fan of the Five Things format too, so whenever I think I can pull one off (my main problem is I usually can't think of *five* things...I tend to get stuck at two or three) I totally have to. I'm glad that you liked it and the way I did the characters :)

And it should really go without saying that I love your Adelle one too, even if I totally skimmed that one cause I'm supposed to be not reading smut - *cough*

LOL, you cheater!! Well, don't worry, I won't tell. And I'm flattered you broke your fast for me, anyway ;) FWW, the next part should be 100% smut-free.

Man, I love me this series!

Awww! *hugs* Thanks so much for all your reviews and encouragement.

[hariboo]

These were great! Topher and Dominic being mistaken for boyfriends was EPIC WIN. Especially with Topher not getting it and calling Dom "Dom-cakes". LOL. Oh, Topher. The Madeline one was lovely. Especially sweet since Dom seemed so blind sided by the realisation that Madeline was you know, one foxy lady.

[demonqueen666]

Hee, I'm glad you liked it! Topher/Dom mistaken-for-BFs shenaigans just had to happen eventually. The way Topher tends to interact with people in general, especially guys, would seriously give someone the wrong impression if they weren't used to him XD

Especially sweet since Dom seemed so blind sided by the realisation that Madeline was you know, one foxy lady.

LOL. Well, it sort of plays into that whole thing with them already being friends, you know? It's kinda awkward when someone you've had platonic feelings for already suddenly becomes attractive to your eyes.

[gryfndor_godess]

I love them all! The first is so hilarious, and the Madeline one is so touching. I like the idea of Dominic having a warm, loving stepmother. The last two lines are excellent!

[demonqueen666]

Thanks! I'm glad you like them so much!

I like the idea of Dominic having a warm, loving stepmother.

You mean, so there's at least one person in his family who wasn't ice cold and CRAZY? ;)

The last two lines are excellent!

I wanted to include that little echo (heh) to back when they first met. Sort of to show he was doomed from the start. Pleased you like it.

[shi_naynay]

Oh how I love this! Topher and Dom-cakes, THE EPIC BROMANCE TO END ALL EPIC BROMANCES. I also loved the Madeline one. I know that Dom is fully devoted to Adelle so a little attraction to Madeline is nothing. Plus, Madeline is gorgeous and awesome so who wouldn’t love her just a little? My feelings on the last part go without saying. *sigh* They make my life so happy. <3

[demonqueen666]

Topher and Dom-cakes, THE EPIC BROMANCE TO END ALL EPIC BROMANCES

I just love them so much. Possibly my favorite relationship I've ever accidentally created. ♥ It makes me so happy inside that other people like them, too.

Glad that you also like the parts with Madeline and Adelle. (Yeesh, Dom's gonna have to start beating the ladies off with a stick...) Thanks so much for commenting :)

[morgan72uk]

ohh - well, I liked all of them as well. Though the Madeline one was unexpectedly lovely and the Topher one made me smile. The last one was just outright gorgeous. He really is in deep isn't he? It makes my heart flutter - but then I start to get worried.

[demonqueen666]

Thank you so much! I'm happy to hear that you liked it.

He really is in deep isn't he? It makes my heart flutter - but then I start to get worried.

Well, I won't say nothing bad is going to happen, but at least they have each other...right?

[morgan72uk]

well, that was what I was worried about.