Comments | demonqueen666: Lost Fic: "A Second Chance for James Ford" (Sawyer, PG-13)

demonqueen666

Lost Fic: "A Second Chance for James Ford" (Sawyer, PG-13)

Jul 07, 2009 14:58

Title: A Second Chance for James Ford
Characters: Sawyer, mention of Jack and Juliet; mention of Sawyer/Juliet
Rating: PG-13 for language, mild darkness
Length: 710 words
Spoilers: S5 finale
Notes: Queen elise_509 requested something that could make her love Sawyer again. I don't know if this is that, but well, I tried.
Summary: After the blast, Sawyer ends ( Read more... )

lost, luau 2009, fanfic

Comments 18

siluria July 7 2009, 20:31:50 UTC

Oh.... now that's a wonderful concept!!!!!

demonqueen666 July 7 2009, 23:13:14 UTC

Heh, thanks. I had the idea and thought it was too intriguing not to try.

elise_509 July 7 2009, 21:40:22 UTC

Great idea! Can you imagine if Sawyer adopted and raised himself? (How mind-boggling that would be, egads!) Thank you so much for this! :)

demonqueen666 July 7 2009, 23:14:23 UTC

Ha, well, that is sort of the idea...but yeah, it's kinda brain-breaking, isn't it?

No problem, thank you for the prompt and the comment!

alliecat8 July 8 2009, 01:36:05 UTC

That's so like Sawyer, to tell himself that everything's an accident, because all his life nothing's made sense. He hates fate, he hates destiny, so he's utterly rejected it. I'd say the most powerful thing that could change that would be finding himself face to face with...himself. I like it that he has sympathy for the boy; that shows how far our self-loathing Sawyer has come since the crash. Maybe the island (and Jack) did him some good, and changed his destiny, after all. Thank you for this wonderful, thought-provoking story!

demonqueen666 July 8 2009, 01:44:15 UTC

Wow, thank you! I'm glad to hear that you liked it and it inspired such thoughts :D

eponine119 July 8 2009, 04:22:20 UTC

Wow, what a great idea and very well done. I almost want to see more of this -- the adventures of James and James -- and yet at the same time that is completely creepy, isn't it?

demonqueen666 July 8 2009, 04:26:14 UTC

The fact that time travel opens it up for you to be adopted and raised by...yourself? Yeah, I'd say so.

Thanks for commenting :)

gottalovev July 8 2009, 17:17:07 UTC

ohhh, I love this idea, that after the events of the finale, they are sent to the place they could make a difference, do some good. and awwww, wee!james, I can totally see it :)

demonqueen666 July 8 2009, 17:27:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you think it works and you liked it.