First off, thanks for letting me know I missed this. I would have been really confused if I skipped this chapter, I think. Also, thanks for the mirror explanations in the early chapters. The problem with doing stream-of-consciousness reviews is often they become odd with the addition of additional information.
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I liked the image of poor distraught Kate with Tony staying with her. I'm not sure exactly why, but this line... Some wounds bled even worse when they were reopened then they had the first time around. affected me. I think you might want "and" rather than "ad" in this line back on her ad started... though.
Awww, poor Tony! This image... He was sitting on the ground with his legs pulled up close in front of him, his arms wrapped tightly around his knees. His head was hanging down, hidden from view. is just so... so... there are no words. Poor Tony! I just want to give him a hug. (Well, maybe a bit more
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Ah, so much Tony angst and hurt to accomplish, so little time. Why is it that we fanfemmes love to make our men suffer so? Are we all really just evil sadists
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I liked the image of poor distraught Kate with Tony staying with her. I'm not sure exactly why, but this line... Some wounds bled even worse when they were reopened then they had the first time around. affected me. I think you might want "and" rather than "ad" in this line back on her ad started... though.
Awww, poor Tony! This image... He was sitting on the ground with his legs pulled up close in front of him, his arms wrapped tightly around his knees. His head was hanging down, hidden from view. is just so... so... there are no words. Poor Tony! I just want to give him a hug. (Well, maybe a bit more ( ... )
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