Fic: Couture - Part 3

Nov 11, 2010 18:53

Title: Couture
Rating: R this part (NC-17)
Pairing: Chris/Zach
Word count: 4957 (this part)
Warning: Language, sexual situations, angst.
Summary: Zach is a fashion designer and Chris is a male model that he takes an interest in.

Previous parts: Part 1 | Part 2

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lalazee November 11 2010, 19:40:20 UTC
FUUUUUUUUUUCCCK.

THIS IS MY FAVOURITE CHAPTER SO FAR. HANDS DOWN.

REASONS WHY:
1. Joe
2. Talk of Oreos
3. Banter about carbs
4. Chris is at least 40% gay OMG LOLOOLLLJDK;AD
5. THIS LOOKS LIKE IT WAS MADE IN SOME FACTORY IN INDIA BY BLIND FIVE YEAR OLDS OH GOD I LAUGHED SO HARD
6. CHRIS NOT TAKING ZACH'S SHIT
7. ZACH PRETENDING HE'S AN INDEPENDENT WOMAN
8. LEATHER
9. ON
10. CHRIS
11. SMOULDERING IN A FIELD.
12. BITCH FIGHTS OH GOD YES THE SNARK

YOU. ARE. SO BEAUTIFULLLLL TO MEEEEEEEE

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lalazee November 11 2010, 21:14:58 UTC
Please note how I tried so very hard to remain out of caps but before I knew it was off and away and even in bold caps land. ILY.

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demonllama1 November 13 2010, 12:26:06 UTC
Errr, if you hadn't reviewed in caps, I would have assumed you were actually dying and then I would have cried and wailed and shouted at the sky 'WHY GOD WHYYYYY'. It would have been bad. Never stop using caps or this will be my response. ;)

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demonllama1 November 13 2010, 12:24:31 UTC
HAHAHA. That list is perfection. PERFECTION. 8,9 and 10 are awesome. ;) You're awesome my love and I continue to want to have your children. Your husband can be the sperm donor or something. ;)

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bostongirl2003 November 11 2010, 19:47:04 UTC
I want more! more more more! I love the development of this, how Zach is trying to resist and can't, the lover's quarrels. Seriously, I love how you always have some level of conflict for the guys to work out in the story (and make up scenes <3) and it isn't 100% lovey-dovey with no real drama.

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demonllama1 November 13 2010, 12:31:28 UTC
Haha, there's parts of me that could so make this entire AU one long fluffy love fest but I figured I'd stomp that out quickly and focus on making it more like a real relationship, which of course includes a whole bunch of conflict. I'm pleased you're enjoying it!

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oanja November 11 2010, 19:53:25 UTC
The characters continue to amuse me greatly! Hee~ great job. =)

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demonllama1 November 13 2010, 12:31:59 UTC
Awww, thank you! I'm pleased you're enjoying it.

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micx04 November 11 2010, 20:57:15 UTC
i am so in love with this that i squee whenever i see a new chapter....wherever i might be at the time like say in a bus! hahaha

love this chapter ...can't wait for more...thanks bb

<3

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demonllama1 November 13 2010, 13:19:40 UTC
Awww, thank you so much! I'm going to try and get the chapters out on Monday and Thursdays HOPEFULLY. :)

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inboots November 11 2010, 21:40:34 UTC
Christopher >;(, the hissyfits must stop, bb. Not even Justin Taylor @ 22 was this pushy, and Brian was a far tougher nut to crack.

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demonllama1 November 13 2010, 13:23:44 UTC
Haha, I'll give you an A+ for slipping in a QAF reference and an icon. :) Thanks for reading.

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