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You're broken, so am I (1/?) NC-17

May 14, 2009 09:12

Title: You're broken, so am I
Pairing: Demon!Dean/Sam
Warnings: AU, post apocalypse fic, dark themes(Thou the first chapter is till quite..err..nice compared to what I have in mind for the future.), Sam is 16, Dean is 20, stripper!sam, demon!dean
Disclaimer: I do not own the boys, I just took them out to play.
Word Count:3031
Summary: This is an AU in ( Read more... )

au, supernatural, apocalypse fic, demon!dean, hydra, sam, fanfiction, ybsai

Comments 28

hydraheiress May 14 2009, 09:01:30 UTC

*squeals* OH MY GODDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!! Okay first off, having the club named after me was all levels of awesomeness! Thanks so much hun! That was really sweet of you!!! *squishes* AND OMG! Demon Dean? And woah! The mental image of Sam dancing and molesting that damn pole! WOMAN! I kept licking my lips while I read that part. Holy shit!!! What a major turn on!

And woah woah woah! You suck at writing? Pssshh, that was so smooth and it...everything worked great with each scene! You don't suck! *glares* Ya hear me? *smiles then nibbles you instead*

Me want the next part NAO! LOL! I'm going to ecstatic mode! *shoots self* XDDD!!!!

demondean May 14 2009, 19:13:13 UTC

OMG -- I didn't meant to do you any harm by over-exiting you. :P So calm down and breathe or yes nibble me. Yeah that's it -- feels good.

What? Oh yes... This comment. Well -- I'm glad to hear you liked it I was really worried that you might not. :D

More? You'll get more soon. :D

*and no more moping -- you hear me! Otherwise I might not give you the next part at all!* *is evil*

damsean May 14 2009, 18:22:08 UTC

Oooohh, Nice start, I am hooked:), want moree plzz

demondean May 14 2009, 19:20:27 UTC

Hooked? *is flattered* Thank you so much hon! :) I'm glad to hear it worked for you as I was killing my (not to mention my beta's) brain-cells with writing this one.

And yes -- more is always one the way. :)

demondean May 21 2009, 21:49:01 UTC

Next chapter up now at http://demondean.livejournal.com/19508.html#cutid1 :)

sulfuricfusion May 14 2009, 18:49:00 UTC

I've been waiting for this to pop up somewhere. Because I'm somewhat of a stalker like that, okay? And, holy crap, I must have been so into it the first (two) times that I missed the moment where Sam shed his pants. o.O Beware readers! Pay extra attention to Sam's dance to envision his pants-strippage!

I'm still curious as to what's going to happen next, though. >.

demondean May 14 2009, 19:38:12 UTC

You're my personal savior hon. And I mean it -- doing beta for me is a challenge only the craziest best of us take on. ;)

XD LAMO "Beware readers! Pay extra attention to Sam's dance to envision his pants-strippage!" Girl! Are you trying to kill me here? Crawls up from the floor and whipes her eyes. Huh. Maybe it was just my bad writing, maybe I should have paid more extra attention to it? *is worried* ;)

"I'm still curious as to what's going to happen next, though. >."
Oh this and that. *is secretive* Don't worrie -- you'll be the first one to know it thou. (That is if you wish to beta for me again. *flashes black demon eyes* Pretty please?)

sulfuricfusion May 14 2009, 19:48:47 UTC

Of course I wish to beta for you again! Are you crazy? I'm already addicted!

...why would I try to kill you? Then I'd never see more of this! And that would be just terrible!

Hmm, no, it was in there pretty clearly, but somehow I missed it. It might have been because it was right after the lyrics (of a song I love as well).

julorean May 15 2009, 01:57:36 UTC

:uses demon!Dean icon just for you:

This is great! I hope it doesn't get TOO super-dark. But I love the start, hot underage stripper Sam, dark and powerful demon!Dean, mmmm. Awesome fic, I'm looking forward to more! :)

demondean May 15 2009, 05:41:27 UTC

Awww... The icon is lovely. :)

I'm not planing to go too dark cause you know demondean's definition of too dark is like yeah -- really creepy. I'm still debating myself about some story developments but I hope you'll be able to digest everything I throw at you.

I really appreciate your feedback and I will surely let you know if the next chap is up.

julorean May 15 2009, 22:24:37 UTC

I can handle some darkness, but not pitch-black stuff like non-con (which I don't think would be the case here, Dean's hot, of course Sam would let him fuck him), abuse, nasty stuff like that. I do very much enjoy slave!Sam being owned by Dean, and when they're rough with each other. ;) But you wrote that Dean feels responsible for him, so that's good. ^____^

demondean May 21 2009, 21:50:47 UTC

New chapter up at http://demondean.livejournal.com/19508.html#cutid1 :)

sau1412 May 15 2009, 02:14:15 UTC

Wowwwwwwww!!You really draw my attention!!Great opening!!It's HOT!HOT!AND HOTTTTTT!
Deamon!Dean is always my favourite!!And stripper!Sam!Delicious!!
Can't wait to see what happen next!!

demondean May 15 2009, 05:55:59 UTC

*squee* Thank you so much for leaving feedback -- it really makes me wanna write faster. :) *hugs you*

demondean May 21 2009, 21:50:22 UTC

Next chapter can be found at http://demondean.livejournal.com/19508.html#cutid1