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_profiterole_ April 20 2009, 19:30:54 UTC
GSD, you'd better hurry up! My poor boys!

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demon_faith April 23 2009, 16:39:16 UTC
Well, there's a shadow on the way at least. And yeah, I have done a bit of a number on them, haven't I? Oops.

Thanks for commenting!

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fresica April 20 2009, 19:34:21 UTC
Every time I see a new chapter, I get all giddy and apprehensive at the same time. Fealty is still one of my favourite Merlin/Arthur stories, but I think that its sequel is tied with it, at least, for the number one spot.

This chapter... I'm not angry with Uther anymore~ He's trying, and it really is a whole different perspective for him. I love Gwen speaking to him the way she does Arthur, too. And Merlin realising they should have been working together the whole time... First of all: FINALLY. But I hope it isn't too late for them to fix it.

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demon_faith April 23 2009, 16:40:45 UTC
AWW! You're making me blush! Fealty has a special place in my heart, I'll admit.

I'm glad I managed to turn you around on Uther. He's not a total arse all the time - and Gwen is awesome with royalty. And yes, Merlin is a little slow, isn't it?

We'll see about the lateness. ;) Thanks!

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dark_subaru April 20 2009, 20:10:16 UTC
You made me almot like Uther!!! Shame, shame, same! How did you do it? Kukuku.
WoW I was nervous all the day, waiting for this chapter. We're near the end of our journey, even if I'd like to think otherwise.
About your reply to my comment, I think Arthur could have an heir even without a wife. Something like "renting a womb", goddess what a crude picture said so.
Marrying without love is horrible. Arthur will suffer, Merlin will suffer and the poor woman chosen will suffer. I'd prefer a agreement: bearing the prince's son will give to the lucky lady importance in the court even without the crown. I don't know if my idea can be possible, but I like to think that being true to you heart is the best way to live.

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demon_faith April 23 2009, 16:51:13 UTC
Hee! I don't know - I don't know how I did it for myself!

Wow, you were nervous? That's a massive compliment! And we are near the end, yes.

Well, they're magic dabblers, so I doubt it's impossible to create a child without a woman at all. However, I like the idea of an Arthur/Gwen sham marriage - I think that as long as they know personally who they're loyal to, the perception of the kingdom doesn't matter.

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archaeologist_d April 20 2009, 21:48:51 UTC
This sounds like Arthur is going to lose. He can hardly defend himself and Merlin is powerless at the moment. I hope the shadow is coming to rescue them.

Great job.

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demon_faith April 23 2009, 16:52:19 UTC
It's on a knife edge, isn't it? I think this is my favourite cliffhanger of the set. :)

Thank you!

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laurapetri April 21 2009, 02:05:00 UTC
YAY DRAGON!!!!!!!!go save the boys!

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demon_faith April 23 2009, 16:53:19 UTC
Something's definitely arriving...

Thanks for commenting!

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