Comments | demon_faith: FIC: Exorcism (REMADE: Alfred, Dick, Bruce)

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FIC: Exorcism (REMADE: Alfred, Dick, Bruce)

Jul 22, 2008 22:03

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ladybugkay July 22 2008, 21:39:00 UTC

Remade fic! Remade fic! Remade fic! \O/

A man was sitting in the drawing room, but who he was, Alfred couldn't say.

Very nicely phrased. At this point, he is empty of identity. He's been 'creating' himself, his personas, for so long that even he doesn't know what lies underneath.

And Amie trickled down the drain.

Great way to illustrate Dick's transformation. Or, rather, his unveiling. And I really like the moment of connection you have written between Dick and Alfred. It works very well.

Love this!

demon_faith July 23 2008, 12:39:41 UTC

Heh. You're my cheering section!

These fragments are about Amie's transition to someone like Dick used to be; however, it's not something that can happen suddenly or easily. Too much has happened in the space in between.

I like the idea of the shower washing away Amie, as it washed away Mary after she'd shot down Bruce.

Thank you, hon.

bradygirl_12 July 22 2008, 22:55:13 UTC

I agree with what ladybugkay said, and I also think that the scene between Dick and Alfred is the best in the story, the faithful butler and friend helping Dick very much here.

*pets them both*

And you know what hurts a LOT? How Dick can't smile anymore. :(

demon_faith July 23 2008, 12:40:32 UTC

Thank you! It's good to know that it's getting better and better, and not just dragging! ;)

It does hurt. It may take some time before he can smile. :(

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demon_faith July 23 2008, 16:04:12 UTC

Alfred is the best. :)

I think this is another step in the healing process - it is going forward, albeit slowly.

On the way!

*blush* Thank you.

skitty_kat July 29 2008, 13:41:35 UTC

I LOVE YOU!

Just a quickie, as I'm meant to be working. But yes, lots and lots of love! Bless the poor wittle Robin!
And Alfred, wonderful Alfred!

demon_faith July 29 2008, 15:25:31 UTC

Heh. Thank you, dear.

We love everybody! I really should work on the next part at some point.

*prods drawing girl* Oi! Draw! *g*

skitty_kat July 29 2008, 15:33:53 UTC

I keep being made to draw other things.
I was at a Snupin meetup last week. It was awesome fun. I ended up drawing them as pirates, nuns and characters from Alice in Wonderland...

I have, however, been to see Dark Knight. And 'tis fantastic! And now I have to see it again because Matt Rippy was in it and I missed him!

dariclone October 5 2008, 00:11:55 UTC

That was really twisty and *very* good.

demon_faith October 5 2008, 09:24:42 UTC

Thank you! Especially for reminding me that I REALLY need to work on the next part!