Comments | demoerin: Fic: Queen's Thief & KHR

demoerin

Fic: Queen's Thief & KHR

Jun 01, 2011 23:55

For the fic meme where people request a ship and a location for them to kiss.

ojuzu: ( Katekyo Hitman Reborn! - Chrome/Xanxus, Kokuyo Land )

hanna is not a boy's name, fic, the queen's thief, reborn!, omg heart

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IloveitIloveitIloveit thelovemafia June 2 2011, 04:24:12 UTC

ED ED I LOVE IT I LOVE IT YOU ARE AMAZING OMG OMG

/ FLAILINGGGGGGGGG

OMG THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUU

PROPER COMMENT WHEN NOT ON MOBILE DEVICE?

Btw was so excited I switched languages to Dutch whyyyyy

wheeee! demoerin June 2 2011, 04:27:10 UTC

LANGUAGE SWITCH \o/ THEN IT'S A SUCCESS! :D Glad you like!

My Internet incoherence is a fearful thing thelovemafia June 2 2011, 05:10:23 UTC

I made three navigational mishaps trying to reply here.

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SO MUCH LOVE OMG.

a very very overdue review omg thelovemafia July 3 2011, 18:14:29 UTC

FINALLY LJ LETS ME POST

I love how logical Gen is ♥

We could try that broad beam across the great hall. People so rarely look up, and your balance is much improved."
heartmark!! is this a reference to that AO3 fic where Costis fell off the beam? ♥

Poor Costis. Poor poor Costis. *hugs him* (poor dazed and confused Costis)

Also I love how this story reads after the mafia kiss thing ;)

Surely it would invigorate them. Probably to run away from me."
HEHEHEEHEHEHEHEHEHEEH OH GEN

you never know, they might form a line :)

HUGS GEN AND COSTIS AND YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU :)

You write such lovely fitting fic that fits together so beautifully ♥

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ojuzu June 3 2011, 02:37:33 UTC

Xanxus and Chrome = surprisingly awww-inducing! I love her cache of emergency supplies, food and weapons and money and then also sewing things and gum. Oh, Chrome. ♥

Also, MM always said that Chrome didn't know what to do with a man but tell him thank you is just the sort of thing she would say. Oh MM, why does no one seem to love you.

demoerin June 3 2011, 15:27:33 UTC

The emergency supplies are things the Kokuyo Crew leave around for each other - or in Ken's case, he hides his gum because the others throw it away. Bah, who needs nutrients!

I'm glad that Xanxan and Chrome came across as cute! I started liking the idea of their interaction a lot while writing this. It's also nice to hear MM sounds like herself because I actually love her. I tend to have a fondness for assholes.

metaphand June 25 2011, 01:39:11 UTC

GODDAMET HOW DID I MISS THE XANXUS/CHROME POST JFKDHSGDFG but oh my god, i'm glad you wrote it. IT'S VERY PRETTY and when i'm free again i should start writing xanxus with females, dammit.

demoerin June 26 2011, 16:29:11 UTC

Ahhh thank you for commenting! Your stamp of approval on a Xanxus fic is a reassuring thing to have.

so I uh wanted to share HINABN fic with you as a thank you thelovemafia July 3 2011, 17:17:25 UTC

ALSO I WANT TO RUN AND HIDE BUT THAT IS NEITHER HERE NOR THERE SO ( ... )

First of all: <3 demoerin July 3 2011, 21:07:49 UTC

By which I mean: <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

“Like what you see?” asks Veser, still preoccupied with attempting to locate clothing in Lee’s closet that isn’t older than he is. Lee can hear the grin in his voice.

VESER

WHY. MY HEART. And when the grin slides off... It's just so gorgeously cocky and ridiculous that he goes straight for the joke, and doesn't really think about how the bruises look - too used to them, or to having no one notice them, or any number of things.

“I’m sorry,” he offers, lamely, wishing he had never walked in, and wishing that walking out now could undo this.
LEEEEEEEEE.

This is a perfect little moment between them that should've been (also, with just the right amount of lol at Lee's ancient clothing), and thank you so much. I can screen the comment, if you want? But I am going to treasure it.