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Nov 25, 2010 22:29

Catching up slowly with Drabblevember. I shall persevere!
Cursed
Characters: brother and sister, nun and chronicler, girl and boy (eventually heroine and hero)
Wordcount: 3 x 100
Notes: unrelated fantasy scenarios. ...I had to fight not to title the last one with "YOU WILL NEVER BE A SHOUNEN HERO".
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thelovemafia November 26 2010, 03:23:40 UTC
THE LAST ONE! The last line! So sad! Poor thing.

But in a way: she was lucky that she was simple and things were quiet. If not, her deepest wish would have been something way bigger, and cause for deeper unhappiness.

I still think you should write a drabble/fic titled "YOU WILL NEVER BE A SHOUNEN HERO". It wouldn't have been an appropriate title for the drabble, but it could be a GREAT title for a yet-to-be-written one!

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demoerin November 26 2010, 04:40:56 UTC
You know, that could actually work as the title of some kind of interestingly meta fic ... HMM. Time to ponder!

But in a way: she was lucky that she was simple and things were quiet. If not, her deepest wish would have been something way bigger, and cause for deeper unhappiness.
Possibly - especially if it were something like "Help me cure the plague". But it might be possible to grow out of other ambitions naturally like she's grown out of the ability to have friends, but in her case she lacks a very basic thing and will never get it back. Instead Slightly Disturbing Nun will always be Slightly Disturbing.

Thank yooooouuuuu for reading because the "original" stuff makes me slightly nervous. Just knowing it's coherent is like, a balm. XD

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demoerin November 30 2010, 17:43:54 UTC
Thank you so much! It's really good to know that there's even some prettiness, when I was worried just about the stories coming across enough.

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