This is super adorable! Though I confess that I spent most of the story thinking Adam was a good deal older than 14 (all that sexual tension with Michael and the comment from Bobby about Adam and Michael fucking their tension out had me briefly placing Adam in the 16-18 range). I suspect Adam will have better luck with Michael once he's actually at the age of consent, lol.
I think my favorite part was the survival test. It was very exciting. I loved how Adam took over the leadership role and the rescue and all of it. It reminded me a little of Harry Potter.
I'm really bad about reading author's notes. Is this story based on a book or a movie or did you come up with all the worldbuilding yourself? Whatever the case, you did a great job. I look forward to reading the next installment.
I'm glad you liked it. Sorry I took so long to get back to you. Its a bit of a mix between a Harry Potter movie marathon and an idea to incorparate dragons. It kind of ate my brain until it turned into a fic. Adam is a snarky kid so naturally he has to flirt with everything that has a heartbeat. It's just how I see him in my head XD
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I think my favorite part was the survival test. It was very exciting. I loved how Adam took over the leadership role and the rescue and all of it. It reminded me a little of Harry Potter.
I'm really bad about reading author's notes. Is this story based on a book or a movie or did you come up with all the worldbuilding yourself? Whatever the case, you did a great job. I look forward to reading the next installment.
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