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How To Score A Threesome Without Really Trying - for annehiro

Jan 10, 2009 18:14

Title: How To Score A Threesome Without Really Trying
Author: kseda
Summary: "From that moment on, I was hers. And his. It's complicated."
Pairing: Ambrose/The Queen/Ahamo. Very much in that order.
Rating: R, for language
Warnings: First-person Ahamo, and his filthy dirty mind.
Author's Note: Anne, sweetie, I looked at your prompts, looked at you, and ( Read more... )

author: kseda, gift for: annehiro, pairing: ambrose/the queen/ahamo, rating: r

Comments 16

allronix1 January 14 2009, 01:51:19 UTC

Definitely reinforces my belief that while Az's paternity could be argued, DG is definitely Ahamo's girl!

His reactions and sarcasm are also very endearing and very much fitting a guy who would later slum it in Oz's underbelly.

And is the whole "Ambrose of Ev" bit becoming another piece of fanon?

kseda January 14 2009, 17:46:03 UTC

She inherited both his artistic skills and his ability to cope with the incredibly absurd, oh yes. I have discovered that I adore Ahamo. He's a scoundrel and a cad, it's... really adorable.

As for Ambrose of Ev, as with most of my Baumian fanon I stole that directly from you. First he was also going to be a slipper from elsewhere, but that got too complicated and, well, Ev's is (presumably) sitting right there, so why not?

Glad you liked it!

blindswandive January 16 2009, 00:56:27 UTC

...and she was dressed in some peach-colored hippie Medieval princess gown that had lace framing her tits. This is so Ahamo-voice. You are a genius.

Shooty Guy, Lonnot or whatever... Also this. <3

This was both the nicest and stupidest dream I'd ever had. Also!

"He is very blond, majesty," the advisor rasped. "Are you certain?" ::laughing her ass off::

Finally it clicked and I pointed at her. "You're pregnant!" I yelped. "You got knocked up and have been waiting around for the first sucker to come along and-"
"Not the first," she snapped and slapped her hand on the table. "We have standards. And I would remind you that you are addressing a monarch."
"Show some respect," Ambrose added and bit into a strawberry. I love Ambrose's tone, there. This is also the best explanation for Why Ahamo? yet. I love you. I owe you baked goods and fruits and things.

Ambrose looked downright scandalized. "Sir, I've taken a vow of celibacy."
I quirked my eyebrows. "Bullshit."

I love that Ambrose was a present. And...

"Uh huh," I replied ( ... )

amedia January 17 2009, 21:51:41 UTC

I love how you write Ahamo's voice! And how we see Ambrose and Lav through his eyes, and finds them creepy and attractive. I would love to read more of this!

amedia January 22 2009, 14:08:43 UTC

I forgot to mention:

The very subtle food-porn (Ambrose & the pomegranate, Ambrose & the strawberry - and Ahamo's NOTICING them)
The teeny little moment of Threesomeness Of Hawt: warm lips were pressed to my neck and the queens hand was sneaking up my leg and-
The subtle ways in which we learn vital information: Neither of them looked at each other so I studied them in turn and saw the same faint blush.
The weird similarities between Lav and Ambrose, at least from Ahamo's POV, which jingles nicely with how we see them in the miniseries flashback
THE PEACOCK!!!!

cartooneyes January 30 2009, 21:17:05 UTC

:D

you have no idea how much i'm squeeing right now...

and OH...Ahamo is Omaha backwards. Why didn't I know that? WHY?