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demi_rabbit

SHINE Survivor Challenges - Part Three

Apr 12, 2010 19:16

So, some time back I entered the Survivor Contest over here at SHINE. Now, SHINE itself is an umbrella forum for Ouran High School Host Club, but for this seven day challenge we were allowed to pick any fandom we wanted and I, being the nerd I am, chose Tsubasa. x3

So, here they are! <3 Enjoy!

Challenge Seven: No 'm' words. "I am not god...yet ( Read more... )

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shadow_of_egypt April 13 2010, 22:14:19 UTC

I enjoyed these - the second one and the last one, in particular. The idea of Kurogane being outdone by Watanuki amused the hell out of me (your sword means nothing, ninja-boy), and the second one was won over by the dialogue - in particular, this little exchange:

“...I...erm...If this is some sort of proposal, I may need time to think about it...”
“It’s not.”
“I’m still going to need time to think about this.”

One general note though; sometimes your grammar was a little shaky, and Chii's comment at the end of the second one seemed...jarring to me? It came off more...rude than funny, and I don't think it's something any Chii would really say - at least, phrased like that. Still, some pretty enjoyable stuff, and congrats for making the final~!