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demi_rabbit

Fic: Of Bubble Baths and Babies

Nov 16, 2009 20:27

Title: Of Bubble Baths And Babies
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst, AU
Pairings or Characters: KyouTama and MoriHaru
Warnings: Yaoi
Summary: He had a wonderful life, an amazing family and...he couldn't remember it. Luckily enough, there seemed to be a beautiful brunette willing to help him pick up the pieces.
Author's Notes: Enjoy. Done ( Read more... )

{pairing}tamakyou, {fandom}ouran, {genra}fanfiction

Comments 4

ink_tree November 17 2009, 08:02:46 UTC

Sobbb - that was so sad. :( I like how you sort of put the reader in Tamaki's position - the relationships, AU, and car crash are revealed to us as they are to him. I really like this AU, by the way. It's really neat how you set that up.

I admit, I have something of a soft spot for amnesia in fanfiction.

Thanks very much for posting this! &hearts

lavinialavender December 11 2009, 00:33:40 UTC

Awww, this fic is so sad and sweet. Good job. I hope the amnesia doesn't last very long. Though the AU part was a bit weird - Mori and Haruhi gave birth to Honey, whaaaaat.

suddenkiss January 8 2010, 02:28:29 UTC

You me cry, Kao! Look at these tears! They're huge! *shows little droplet in hands*

My goodness, this was so good! I ike how you made Kao, Hika, and Hunny their kids, it's so adorable! I loved it! *sniffle*

I love it from Tama's view too, I wouldn't have liked it so much from another characters! He was so scared, and he made me scared! But him saying, "mon ami" made me feel better.

Whoot! I love this story now! Wonderful, Kao!

(this leaves me wondering why I haven't read through your thingies)

demi_rabbit January 9 2010, 01:29:55 UTC

D8 -gives hanky- Dun cry!!! It had a happy-ish ending!!! Nothing to cry about!!! And, yeah! xD I thought I was so clever for making the 'kids' some of the actual kids....And AU Hunny always ends up being the child of Mori for some reason...o.0 Must just be a special thing for me..xD

Nothing seemed appropriate for POV other than Tama-drama...Mainly because it gave me a chance to just spell out every aspect of his and Kyou's life together and shiz without getting crap for shoving in unneccesary details.

^^ Probably because I've never poked ya to? I dunno - but definately read more ['specially if reviews are gonna be left! -review whore-]