Bleach Fanfiction // Afterparty Part I

[demented_dee]

Title: Afterparty Part I of II
Series: Monoshizukanohi//Bleach AU
Author: Darkprism & Liralen
Genre: Drama/Romance/Kink
Rating: Mature
Pairing: Foursome: Byakuya & Renji // Kisuke & Shuuhei
Word Count: Complete. Total ~16K.
Warnings/Notes: THIS CHAPTER: D/s Relationships, impact play, denial, toys, hand job, oral, foursome, side story
Spoilers: None

Comments

NICE

[melvinssyn]

Wow, that was very nice. Thank-you.

Re: NICE

[demented_dee]

Thank YOU for reading! Part II coming soon.

♥♥♥

[mignonne422]

Oh...oh my...

/fans

That was delicious. Just, mmm mmm good, yes. I can't wait for part 2!

I have been madly in love with your Renji and Byakuya since Closet Games and I love everything and anything that features them.

Just one tiny thing though, I think maybe there was a typo or a glitch where a sentence or more might have gotten eaten around the middle? Right around this part:

Byakuya grunted, head lolling forward and looking slightly dazed. Shuuhei rose up on his knees, maneuvered to kneel behind Kisuke and hesitantly put hands on Kisuke's hips, not wanting to get in the way and turning over things in his brain that would keep Byakuya's lips parted just like that.Unnah!"

[demented_dee]

I have NO idea what happened, there. *laughs* DON'T POST SLEEPY! I think it's now fixed, and thank you for the heads up!!!

And very happy you enjoyed the slightly-garbled version. Hopefully THIS one will make more sense. XD

♥

[mignonne422]

Yessss. Oh, that is delightful. I loved it before, but the extra paragraphs definitely just took it to another level of hotness. *.*

I don't have enough words of praise, really, everything you write is magical and shiny in it's dirty deliciousness. Love love love it all and can't wait for more! <333

[hoka_no_koto]

(duplicating my comment in bleach yaoi...beause it's late and my brain has all but shut down...)

Please, please may I have some more, oh Mistress of Luscious Word Pictures?

[demented_dee]

*laughs*

Soon, lovely, very soon.

Thank you for reading. <3

Wah!

[una_animo]

Hollyshhhh... I peed!

Freaking awesome XD

Re: Wah!

[demented_dee]

*cackles*

I think that's somehow an appropriate reaction. *grins*

Thank you very much for reading!

[lightechos]

Fantastic as always! I loved Closet Games and I'm going to reread it as soon as I'm finished here. I am so glad to see them all again, and all together it's so fucking hot. I can not wait for part II! Thank you so much for sharing.

[demented_dee]

Thank you so much! Thrilled you enjoyed both Closet Games and this one, as well. ♥