Comments | delrhei_writing: [One-Shot] Moonlight

kryss_delrhei in delrhei_writing

[One-Shot] Moonlight

Jan 09, 2012 22:34

Title: Moonlight
Author: kryss_delrhei
Fandom: Dragon Age: Origins
Type: Video Game
Characters/Pairing: Alistair/Solona
Word Count: 1,281
Genre: Romance

Rating: PG-13
Warning: voyeurism, slight nsfw
Summary: Heady desire and a longing that is hidden in the bushes.
Disclaimer: I do not own Dragon Age nor the characters, just borrowing them from BioWare for a little ( Read more... )

length: 1001 - 15000, style: het, warning: voyeurism, @ comm: a_writing_muse, @ comm: swooping_is_bad, fandom: dragon age origins, character: da: f!amell, type: one-shot, @ comm: circle_tower, genre: romance, character: da: alistair theirin, media: fanfiction, pairing: da: alistair theirin/f!amell

Comments 2

joelthecat January 10 2012, 12:36:17 UTC

"he lost his grip on the wood he’d been holding onto."

Oops.

This is delightful. I love how you go into each nuance of poor Alistair's emotional state and explore each crook and corner before moving on to the next. Well done.

And as always, I love your endings.

kryss_delrhei January 10 2012, 14:19:37 UTC

Thank you so much! Hehe. My lovely beta finds it so hilarious about the wood part too!

"He dropped his wood only to grab a hold of his 'woody'."

Thank you thank you! *bows* You have made my day so much better.