Where the fears make us whole; ~1400 words; PG

Aug 06, 2011 12:50

thegrrrl2002 won me at the helpthesouth auction, and this fic is my offering! One of the prompts she offered for me to write was a sequel/coda of months and miles from dream, and this is what I did. Steve adjusting to being domestic.

where the fears make us whole, about 1400 words, PG )

boxer!danny is hot as fuck, h50, steve/danno

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azziria August 6 2011, 12:07:51 UTC

Oh God, this is *perfect*, I know that feeling so well, when you love them and you want them around but sometimes you just need some *space*. And it's just how this Steve would be, trying to adjust to settling down. Beautiful.

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delicatale August 6 2011, 13:30:46 UTC
Ohh, I'm glad I didn't fuck it up!

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azziria August 6 2011, 13:41:58 UTC
You certainly didn't!

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ellie_pierson August 6 2011, 13:37:59 UTC
I totally get how Steve is feeling. I've been married for 20 years and there are times I just want to run away for a while.

Thank you for the follow up. I love to peek in on the boys every so often.

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delicatale August 6 2011, 13:39:26 UTC
Sometimes it might be better to get some space than to explode in your significant other's face, I guess!

Am glad you liked, thanks for reading!

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jazzybabe56 August 6 2011, 16:26:33 UTC
THIS ^ ^

to this day I still need ME time.....so I take it....I walk, I clean my closet (its a walk in closet so I can close the door...LOL) or I come to the Pc and read fanfiction....like today - and I'm glad I did!

this was precious ♥♥

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delicatale August 6 2011, 16:30:54 UTC
Thank you very much! =D

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gyri August 6 2011, 14:04:00 UTC
I loved getting this glimpse into Steve's head, and how he's adjusting to his new life. The conflict between past and present, his feelings of being trapped and needing space, were so real.

And I love Danny not giving up on him. :-)

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delicatale August 6 2011, 14:14:07 UTC
Danny would never! He didn't when he was only seeing Steve once a year, he's not going to start now ;). Glad you liked!

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jesseofthenorth August 6 2011, 14:51:49 UTC
Nice work!
Steve's chain of thought through his freak out really rang true, and I love that it's not all sunshine and roses but just fucked up and human.
Good job on staying true to the characterizations in the original fic.

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delicatale August 6 2011, 15:19:05 UTC
Oh, I'm glad you think so - I've never had one of these freak-outs myself so I just went with the flow. Am also glad you didn't think they differed from the original fic ^_^. Thanks for reading!

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sunhawk August 6 2011, 15:42:22 UTC
Awwww lovely fic :) Steve struggling like that is just so true to his nature and his SEAL training.

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delicatale August 6 2011, 15:43:40 UTC
<3 thank you very much!

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