Comments | delicatale: Human Cargo

delicatale

Human Cargo - 400 words, PG-15

Jun 13, 2011 11:04

Hello! Today I have a drabble for you, the last one I wrote for sd-ldws. The prompt was Scifi and phase/stun gun/laser gun. I also have a question.

( Human cargo, 400 words. )

fic and things, why do i write au, h50, steve/danno

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zoronoa June 13 2011, 16:42:38 UTC

I would totally read more, hell, I'd even do fanart for it if you did (totally not a bribe, no, never)!

delicatale June 13 2011, 16:45:40 UTC

Heeeeeeeee omg that is the best bribe of all bribes, though XD.

zoronoa June 13 2011, 16:49:26 UTC

Enough of a bribe for you to consider writing more, Y/Y!? I'm so already geared up for claiming your story in Five0BigBang, and it's about 6 months away... IDEK...

delicatale June 13 2011, 16:52:45 UTC

Omg yes - not that I need to be bribed that much when I already want to write it SO HARD - depending on how well the BIG BAKERY AU OF DOOM goes when we start writing it I might start it very soonish. I've always wanted to write a Firefly-like fic and I have never done it!

Ahahah you do? I seriously cannot wait to start writing this fic. Baking! Food fights! STUPID BOYS IN LOVE. *excited fingers*

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_thelostcity June 13 2011, 17:02:06 UTC

I would def read more of it :-)

delicatale June 13 2011, 17:02:53 UTC

Yay! That's good to know!

dirtyjersey2534 June 13 2011, 17:13:59 UTC

Firefly + Five-0 is a genius idea that I wish I had had first. Keep it up! I'll agree with the above comments - I'd be very interested in reading more!

delicatale June 13 2011, 18:04:21 UTC

Ahahah! I have had the idea from the moment I stepped into the fandom but I've had doubts on whether or not it'd work. But then this prompt happened and I just went for it - and now I can't get it out of my head!

imaginarycircus June 13 2011, 18:51:29 UTC

Intriguing. I love love love Firefly so I would read too. :D

delicatale June 13 2011, 18:54:23 UTC

Fireflyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I miss it so D:. I have had the idea from my first steps in the fandom but I wasn't sure how it'd fit. Then this prompt arrived and I was like 'oh, fine' and suddenly Chin was Wash and Kono was Kaylee and Danny was not quite Jayne but so completely in love with his Captain Tight Cargoes McGarrett and Catherine as Inara and just. I don't know it works in my head!

imaginarycircus June 13 2011, 18:59:16 UTC

Ooooo. BUT WHO IS ZOE?! I would think Kono would be Zoe. But yeah, then who would be Kaylee... Mary?

delicatale June 13 2011, 19:14:20 UTC

I don't think Mary would make a good Kaylee - not enough innocence here. Kono could combine jobs really, she's kickass enough XD.

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esteefee June 13 2011, 19:15:34 UTC

oh man YEAH I would totes read more of this, it's fantastic. :>

I think for me it would be hugely dangerous to have this giant, blossoming idea and just rack it...don't you think you might lose some of the energy and ideas that were bubbling up? That's what would happen to me, anyway.

delicatale June 13 2011, 19:20:39 UTC

Hee! I am so very glad to see a few people wanting to see more of this!

In a way, it is dangerous, but in another I have had that idea for a while so I doubt I'll lose the motivation. I'd start to write it right now if I didn't have a 35K+ fic that needs to be carefully finished and a 40K minimum Big Bang that I'm starting in a few days! When I'm finished with Boxer!Danny, I probably will start it, because I'm not doing the Big Bang alone so that'd be easier.