Still Breathing

[del_rion]

Story Info

Title: Still Breathing

Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)

Fandom: Heroes

Era: Season 3 (episode 12/13)

Genre: Drama

Rating: K / FRC

Characters: Claire Bennet, Peter Petrelli (, Nathan Petrelli)

Summary: Peter reflects on his life after Nathan’s gone.
Complete.

Written for: Heroes_Contest’s (heroes-contest) Drabble Challenge 31: Breath.

Comments

[quirkysmuse]

This is very sad, but a great moment between Peter and Claire. You do an excellent job of describing Peter's feelings toward Nathan here. It's so very Peter, you know?
Well done.

[del_rion]

I'm so glad you liked this, and found it... well, "authentic". :)

[dancingdragon3]

This was wonderfully written. I was right there in the scene with Peter. And wow to that last line. It put a whole new spin on the emotions.

[del_rion]

Well, Peter is ever so passionate... about feeling guilty, sad, and doing the right thing, which in this case was to kick Sylar's ass until there would be nothing left XD

thanks for reading and dropping a commment; I'm glad you enjoyed!

[game_byrd]

Lovely little missing scene! I know we got to see Nathan's funeral and wake in the show, and even that was more than I expected, but there's so much more of the mourning process we missed out on seeing. Thanks for sharing this! It's like something right out of the show!

[del_rion]

Yeah, they tended to forget certain little humanizing details... all along the show...

Glad you liked and thought it felt "real" :)

[del_rion]

Yeah, poor Peter... feels too guilty about things he didn't do. He loves thinking in hindsight way too much.

So glad you liked this one as well ^^ thanks for the lovely comment!