Encounter - Chapter Seventeen - Part II

Jun 07, 2009 00:56

            With a lot of sweat, a few grumbles, several swear words and many laughs, Ennis and Jack moved all the furniture into the girls’ room. The transformation of the small space was amazing, and Ennis couldn’t wait to have his kids over night.
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jacks_key June 7 2009, 13:01:39 UTC
Oh, boy. Ennis is about to catch hell. Damn that Alma! LOL

The sex was very, very hot. You are a true slash writer for real, sis! :)

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enoughtohurt June 7 2009, 15:51:56 UTC
Oh, YAYAY!! I missed this story so much.

This chapter was so gorgeous, very sweet and hot. Your boys are just adorable. ♥ And I am a sucker for Ennis calling Jack “darling” and “baby”, and I loved too when Jack said this:

“God, Ennis, Ennis, Ennis, baby,” Jack moaned.

The sex was amazing!! But I love even more the tenderness and devotion they share.

Oh my, I hope Alma doesn’t give them trouble. Ennis always can say that he had some drinks with his friend last night and they got drunk and Jack couldn’t drive like that, so he spent the night there, and it’s normal that he needs to use the shower now. People use to get a shower every day, right?

Thank you for this. I can not wait for more. I love your boys.

Big hugs.

Tammy.

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eandj June 7 2009, 19:39:33 UTC
“Did he just ask to use your shower?”
gulp-
finally Alma is acting friendly but I hope she stays this way after Ennis' answer
good chapter- thank you
Paula

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ramona4jake June 8 2009, 14:30:44 UTC
Say he helped you with the furniture and now needs the shower to get ready for work !! She doesn't need to know all the details, duh !!
Thank you, I was missing your story, hope you up-date soon !

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torry28 June 10 2009, 00:40:48 UTC
I like this, Ennis and Jack getting closer together and its nice of Jack to help him out to make the girls room comfortable for them. The bell always seams to ring at the wrong time, Alma is full of questions and poor Ennis lost for word as always. Hope this dose not make Ennis get cold feet and revert to his lonely time without Jack in it.That would blow progress right out the window. Don't let nosy x-wives or old nightmares rule your life Ennis stick with Jack, he is your happiness.
Love your writing.
Hope you are doing well.
Love,
Torry

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