ooh this chapter is in first(?) person... i don't even like jongyu lol but you made me like them :3 your imagery is really vivid and evocative, and your word choices are so concise. it's really a pleasure to read.
One day… I would make that Flaming Charisma regret thrashing me so badly during our ‘friendly’ games such as today.
Think, Dino-boy.. think! LMAO
i thought the previous chapter was leading up to jongho, hmmm... love triangle? 8D jk. i really like the way you described eunsook, and their childhood love is so cute *~*
Brighter than the sun, yet never demanding for attention; it was a smile that was just… her.
icwudt sneaking joon in :B this chapter was so sweet. can't wait to read moar! ♥
I seriously like melody motives in stories, this is just so sweet ^*^~♥ I'm not a JongYu shipper (though I enjoy to read some jongyu drabble from time to time!), nor the het version of it. Anyway, the way you described Eunsook was so nice and cute and ooh, it was just... her. :) I can't seem to find next chapters though! Maybe because you haven't posted them?... Hey! You have to write and post it! I suppose there won't be any of my favourite pairings, but the story just seems very interesting, also the style of your writing is so good... I think I might even not care about the pairings, I can endure 2min, which, I predict, will be seen at some point... Hahahah ^^ I just want more!
"I can always just change the names in my mind and make it ontae..." ... You can't hear my thoughts, can you? ^^;;;
what are your favourite pairings? haha.. I only have the next chapter done. but very honestly, the first 3 chapters were written with dbsg in mind. I've just changed the names. but there didn't seem to be much interest in this so I kinda lost the motivation to write..
but I have the rough plotlines in mind.. so do let me know what you would like to see and I can see if it fits in?
My favourite pairing is OnTae, as you could already notcie ^^""" OnTae, EunTae, OnYeon, EunYeon (are there even names like those?) are all fine, their characters are just so suited for each other in my opinion ;_; I like JongKey, too, and lately MinKey. I like JongYu, but not so much - how should I put it, I like them as the dorky friends they are. Aww, you should write and post the rest! Just put the link to the previous chapters so people can read it from the beginning :3 For me it really is interesting and I'd like to know the rest of stories, you know, from other members POV. Oh my! I don't want you to write with me in mind, I'd like you to just write what YOU want to put there. All I can say is that lovely actions between characters (like when Jonghyun gave Eunsook his trophy!) are just melting me, especially when they are involved in great-plotted-stories (ah my poor English, I cannot even say what's exactly on my mind, sorry)
oh don't worry! haha.. im using it more as something to refer to. cause im quite lost about how to pair them here. its like a big BIG mess. i have my characters in mind actually.. i just need names. this sounds so desperate. desperate but true. =( sadly.
and for the first bit.. i think i'll live with just ontae and/or het!ontae.
eunsook's awesome no? =D haha.. i hope you like the sequel then! =D
AND YES. oh gosh.. great minds think alike. obviously eunsook's so brilliant. the rest are just jelly. =p stupid stupid jjong too. dino boy hasn't evolved sufficiently to develop a proper brain i say. =p
haha.. awwwwwwwwwwwww.. im touched much. =D haha.. i hope the onkey was satisfactory. =)
i would totally adore her. have a girl-crush on her or something. and i bet she would be awesomely sweet about it. something like jinki in my ontae fic. haha.. which would make me love her even more. =p
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One day… I would make that Flaming Charisma regret thrashing me so badly during our ‘friendly’ games such as today.
Think, Dino-boy.. think!
LMAO
i thought the previous chapter was leading up to jongho, hmmm... love triangle? 8D jk. i really like the way you described eunsook, and their childhood love is so cute *~*
Brighter than the sun, yet never demanding for attention; it was a smile that was just… her.
icwudt sneaking joon in :B this chapter was so sweet. can't wait to read moar! ♥
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I'm not a JongYu shipper (though I enjoy to read some jongyu drabble from time to time!), nor the het version of it. Anyway, the way you described Eunsook was so nice and cute and ooh, it was just... her. :) I can't seem to find next chapters though! Maybe because you haven't posted them?... Hey! You have to write and post it! I suppose there won't be any of my favourite pairings, but the story just seems very interesting, also the style of your writing is so good... I think I might even not care about the pairings, I can endure 2min, which, I predict, will be seen at some point... Hahahah ^^ I just want more!
"I can always just change the names in my mind and make it ontae..."
... You can't hear my thoughts, can you? ^^;;;
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but I have the rough plotlines in mind.. so do let me know what you would like to see and I can see if it fits in?
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Aww, you should write and post the rest! Just put the link to the previous chapters so people can read it from the beginning :3 For me it really is interesting and I'd like to know the rest of stories, you know, from other members POV.
Oh my! I don't want you to write with me in mind, I'd like you to just write what YOU want to put there. All I can say is that lovely actions between characters (like when Jonghyun gave Eunsook his trophy!) are just melting me, especially when they are involved in great-plotted-stories (ah my poor English, I cannot even say what's exactly on my mind, sorry)
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and for the first bit.. i think i'll live with just ontae and/or het!ontae.
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AND YES. oh gosh.. great minds think alike. obviously eunsook's so brilliant. the rest are just jelly. =p stupid stupid jjong too. dino boy hasn't evolved sufficiently to develop a proper brain i say. =p
haha.. awwwwwwwwwwwww.. im touched much. =D haha.. i hope the onkey was satisfactory. =)
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