Inversely proportional

[dejavu_love]

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[dejavu_love]

spot for secretscribe13 !

[dejavu_love]

i totally believe in Christina's Law then! we need to get it listed somewhere next to Newton's Laws. =p

also, is writing another one a good idea?

[dejavu_love]

spot for spot for mimi_oly !

[jinkibumiminho]

So, let me get this straight:
Jong>Key
Key>Minho
Minho>Taemin
Taemin>Onew.

Oh, yes. Now let's have a power outage or some other minor disaster at school that traps them all together for a cracktastic ot5!!!!

Well done, angsty without going overboard!

[dejavu_love]

hahaha.. WOAH. i think my brain would implode from the absolute insanity of it all. >.< so much unrequited love i think my laptop might just crash.

[dejavu_love]

spot for jess_mmam ! i hope this doesn't disappoint!

[jess_mmam]

Yeah!! I'm first to comment!
In reality, I'm really happy. If Kibum can't be happy then no one should be happy! lol

I really like the "inversely proportional" theory! It's bitter... Convenient for unrequited love. In a way the atmosphere was lighter because Minho rationalize things then at the end:
"I see the happiness interspersed with a dull, throbbing pain in Jjong’s eyes as Kibum looks past him." There I remember Jjong and Key's feelings and I can't hate him anymore...
Even if I'm still happy he suffers...
I'm complicated.

Thanks for making Minho as helpless as the others!
And see you soon (hope to read your future work)... <3 <3

[dejavu_love]

haha.. are you turning into a sadist like me?? =p hahahahaha..

also, gonna go post the new one up! =D

[jess_mmam]

I've always been a sadist in a way... I like to see them suffer before finding happiness! Then I'm like: "You really merit your happy ending!"

But for me, you're my master in this art; a total sadist! lol
I'm sure you're thinking "How can I make them all sad and helpless without any hope left? Hum..."
I'm afraid I'm becoming addicted to this?!

Hum... New one you said?!

[jishu]

damn.... they all have unrequited love XD

[dejavu_love]

mianhae!! somehow it just came out like that. i guess it seems a little unfair that someone gets requited love while the rest just cry? =( haha.. new one's posted and hopefully its a little more.. open-ended?

[fantasydesire]

My favourite lines :

The more you love someone, the less likely he is to love you back. The more your heart pines for him, the higher the chance that his heart seeks another.

This is how nature makes a mockery of us all.

= PERFECT description of life. ^^

and yeah.. another sad story..
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[dejavu_love]

haha.. sorry!! hopefully the new one i posted is a little more open-ended?