Not The Way It Works

[deird1]

Okay, here it is: my cya_ficathon assignment.

(And in honour of the occasion, I'll even attempt some proper headings…)

Title: Not The Way It Works
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3600
Disclaimer: All places mentioned in this story are fictional, and no reference to real locations is intended. Except for Los Angeles - apparently that’s real.
Warnings: Grenades,

Comments

[spankulert]

This one was a hoot. Projectile vomiting, Angel being all fuzzy in the head and Fredikins taking care of business? Brill!

“Um, hello? I was actually serious about that last one. If I could find the fire alarm we’d have the big whooping noise, too - but even without the whooping, the store is still on fire… Please get out. Uh, now.”

Great dialogue too :)

[deird1]

I'm glad you liked it!

[acacia5]

That was wonderful, I really enjoyed this. It made me laugh, and I thought that you did a great job keeping Fred and Lorne in character.

[deird1]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[thismaz]

Heee, loved Lorne's songs. And practical matter of fact Fred. Lovely. Thanks.

[deird1]

I'm glad you liked it!

[dreamincolor]

This truly was a stunning piece, and I'm so lucky to have gotten a peek at it before the rest of the fandom world! The way you characterized both Fred and Lorne -two of my absolute favorites, especially together- made for lovely scenes, with lovely dialogue, and even lovelier character voices.

-huggle squish- Fantastic job.

(And you finished early, too!)

[deird1]

*huggles*
Thanks so much for beta-ing this for me, darling. It was so very helpful.

I'm glad you liked the finished product!

[brutti_ma_buoni]

People should write more Fred & Lorne, at least if they can get it to this quality. They're such fun to read (and read like they were fun to write too). This is great!

[deird1]

Thanks!

This was incredibly fun to write...