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Commentary - You and I, We Fly Together

Feb 19, 2010 20:51

Here’s a commentary!

This is for lavastar, who asked for one of You and I, We Fly Together.

The fic looks like normal, and the commentary is in blockquotes.

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lavastar February 20 2010, 00:58:40 UTC

*claps excitedly*

Very good! I hadn't actually quite realized it was all the same hour, so that was neat - and hearing how you planned it all out was very fun.

Great job!

deird1 February 20 2010, 22:23:13 UTC

Glad you liked it!

ladyofthelog February 20 2010, 06:49:42 UTC

I really enjoyed this! Plus, I hadn't read this fic before, so I got to do that, too. Very nifty narrative structure, which you seem to do a fair share of (at some point, I will leave you a proper a review for Just The Four Of Us, which is one of my favorite fics ever) and which I love to do myself, so I'm always happy to see it in a fic. Also, your Andrew and Dawn ROCK.

I've never done fic commentary myself, and am now wondering if I should do one at some point. Hmm.

deird1 February 20 2010, 22:23:54 UTC

Commentaries are fun! Do some!

at some point, I will leave you a proper a review for Just The Four Of Us, which is one of my favorite fics ever

Really? Wow.

Glad you liked this!

ladyofthelog February 20 2010, 22:27:25 UTC

Really. It's incredibly tightly crafted, I love the crazy narrative structure, and you manage to do justice to so many characters and relationships over a lengthy timespan in 5000 words. That's pretty impressive. Every time I read it, I just want to hug everyone. Especially Wynn and Cordy.

(also, why I friended you! I read that and The Very Secret Diary of Andrew Wells, and was like, "My, this deird1 is awesome!"