Fanfic: Stay With Me

[deinonychus_1]

Title: Stay With Me

Comments

[reggietate]

You've captured Nick's thoughts and feelings very well in this scene. It can't have been easy for him, after so many years of hoping and imagining his reunion, to have it turn out like this...

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks! Poor Nick, after all that time, it must have been difficult to be reminded of what Helen was really like.

[nietie]

That is a wonderful, insight look at this important scene between Nick and Helen.
That last line says it all.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks. Poor Nick, but at least he managed to maintain some control.

[knitekat]

Great look at Nick's thoughts and feelings during that scene.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks!

[goldarrow]

I like that look inside Nick's head. You've put into words the expressions on his face very clearly.
Nice.

So many ways she would do the same, maybe even admit that she had been wrong about her crazy theories (okay, maybe that last part had been a stretch of the imagination, but the rest of it was at least possible).
LOL.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks! I had to watch the scene a couple of times, and was trying to work out what must have been going on in his head for the entire conversation. Glad it worked.

[cordeliadelayne]

That's a great look at Nick's feelings during that scene.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks!