Fanfic: Not Exactly Shakespeare

[deinonychus_1]

Title: Not Exactly Shakespeare

Comments

[fredbassett]

Oh dear, poor Becker kept making that one worse!

The poem was very cute, and I loved him being dictated to by Abby and Emily!

[deinonychus_1]

He did have a rather bad case of foot-in-mouth disease, bless him. Abby and Emily clearly know how to deal with Becker when he's being inept about relationships, and probably a good thing too!

[stealingpennies]

Becker and his guns - 99 per cent may be an understatement. I liked how everyone was lining up to make poor angsty, emotionally inarticulate Becker feel even worse - and am a little in love with the phrase 'commit extreme gossip'. Actually I feel Becker got off very lightly. He's lucky Jess is so forgiving and he is so cute.

[deinonychus_1]

Ye, there did seem to be a lot of people who were surprisingly eager to rub it in when Becker was being an idiot, weren't there?

And I suspect Becker gets away with an awful lot of things just because Jess can't resist him when he's being cute and pathetic.

[celeste9]

Hahahaha, that was adorable! Becker's sulky, snarky narration was the best and I was cringing for him during that horrible poem! Love the girls being awesome, and Lester glaring because Becker dared to be mean to Jess, and Matt purposely being an ass. Also, I really liked how Jess expressed herself so rationally while explaining exactly why Becker had been horrible and an idiot. I hate V-Day, but even I would have been pissed at that!

[deinonychus_1]

Heehee! Thanks. Poor Becker, he was sulking a bit, bless him, but I think he deserved all the girls ganging up on him. Poor Jess, she was being very calm and rational about it, which probably made it even worse for Becker because then he couldn't just write it off as women being overly emotional (and possibly hormonal).

Also, Becker probably shouldn't give up his day job to become a poet...

[lsellersfic]

Hee! Becker's poetry is priceless!

[deinonychus_1]

Hee, thanks. Poor Becker, hopefully he's learned his lesson so he won't have to write any more poetry.

[dreamer_98]

Don't know how I missed this one! Yay for the ARC ladies sticking together and for Becker making a fool of himself and mangling Shakespeare to make it up to Jess. The image of him down on one knee reciting poetry is priceless. Adorable!

[deinonychus_1]

Hee, thanks, glad you liked it. Of course the ladies were going to stick together, and I don;t think Becker will dare to forget next year!