fanfic: Void (part 2)

[deinonychus_1]

Title: Void - part 2/2

Comments

[tay_21]

OH! I've never been so relieved for a rape to NOT happen. That was soooo good. Super hero Ryan was awesome.

I hope his army buddies go back and teach Leek and his staff a few lessons themselves. So is that what changed? Leek bought the club? This was very interesting. I loved the dynamic between Connor and Ryan was just perfect.

Frankly I'm surprised Ryan held it together as much as he did.

Freaking EXCELLENT story and an excellent use of the prompts. I freaking loved it!

[deinonychus_1]

yey, glad you liked it. I did start to write this way back in January when you put the prompts on the January fest for Ryan, but it stalled for ages, and I finally managed to finish it for the Connor fest instead!

I'm pretty sure Ryan will find some way to make Leek pay properly, just not when Connor is watching.

[natchris]

“Don’t forget tomorrow we need to deal with the little matter of that reminder lesson you earned this evening,” Ryan whispered. He traced along the edge of the metal plate of the belt with his finger, and then slid lower, deliberately teasing for a brief moment."

Delectable!

[deinonychus_1]

thanks. Poor Connor, but I'm sure Ryan will reward him for good behaviour later.

[flaccidduck]

Well, I'm cheering!!

[deinonychus_1]

yey, thanks!

[jaynedoll]

yay for Ryan to the rescue and I loved the way you wrote the aftermath as well.

[deinonychus_1]

thanks. I was a bit worried about the final scenes, so glad to hear that worked

[knitekat]

Yay for Ryan to the rescue and the snuggles at the end.

[deinonychus_1]

thanks. Connor deserved some comfort after all that.