Fanfic: Skating on Thin Ice

[deinonychus_1]

Title: Skating on Thin Ice
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/characters: Becker/Jess, Abby
Rating: 12
Warnings: Fluff
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.
Word count: approx 4290
Summary: It’s winter, and Jess really wants to go ice skating. Becker really... doesn’t.
AN: Becker fic for the primeval_denial July

Comments

[telperion_15]

Awwwwwwww, that was an adorable fic of adorableness!

“Ice skating? As in the thing where you strap sharp metal blades to your feet and then fall over a lot?”

Couldn't have put it better myself, Becker! *g*

Women definitely cheated.

Of course! It's the easiest way to win! ;)

[deinonychus_1]

Lol, yes, the fluff bunnies really came out to play with this one. And I definitely agree with that definition of ice skating as well!

[clea2011]

Awwwwwww! That's lovely! *snuggles the adorable fic* Loved the bit where they're trying to out-manipulate each other in Jess's kitchen.

And yay for snowy fic in July!

And LOL at that last line! *g*

[deinonychus_1]

hee, thanks. I'm really not entirely sure which one of them won in the kitchen conversation.

[judithjohn]

“You ought to see what the snow is doing to your hair.”

LOL! - and lovely!

[deinonychus_1]

hee, thanks, glad you liked it.

[goldarrow]

“Ice skating? As in the thing where you strap sharp metal blades to your feet and then fall over a lot?”
Remembering my first time on the ice, I would say that's a perfect description of skating *nods*

Becker frantically searched his brain for something to say that wouldn’t a) make the situation worse, or b) end with him agreeing to go ice skating.
*g*

Abby took a few seconds to process that sentence,
*bg* took me a few also. Not the most articulate of Beckers...

Becker had the horrible feeling he was about to be well and truly cornered.
Yep.

and what little was left of Becker’s defences threw down their weapons and surrendered.
*snorfle*

This was great. Brought back so many memories!

And poor Becker, having the baggage of having to be perfect about everything!

[deinonychus_1]

lol, thanks. Yes, I fully agree with Becker on the subject of ice skating, especially the 'falling over' part of it!

[dreamer_98]

Too cute! I love that Becker was able to be honest with Jess about his fear of not being perfect and always trying to be the best, and that he was willing to forgo his ego and give it a try for her. All of their bantering and flirting was adorable.

And hee, the snow messing up his beautiful hair. :P

[deinonychus_1]

hee, thanks. Poor Becker, but he did sort of enjoy himself in the end, even if it was at the expense of his dignity!