"Last Promises" - Adama/Roslin Drabble

Dec 26, 2012 23:03

Title: Last Promises
Pairing: Adama/Roslin
Rating: T
Word Count: 300 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters or television show.
A/N: Written for the  adama_roslin  holiday gift exchange for  kaitlynn96  who wanted a fic set during Daybreak, after Laura volunteers for the mission.

Other wish list items:

more gifts! :D )

bill adama, fanfic, laura roslin, mary mcdonnell, adama/roslin, edward james olmos

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redrockcan December 27 2012, 22:00:37 UTC
Wonderful scene and what a great moment to choose. *sniff* They are so supportive of each other. You've hit the perfect balance, sngsty and loving and all that good a/r stuff we love. Great work!!

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defyingnormalcy December 27 2012, 23:24:49 UTC
Yes, it was a wonderful prompt to receive. :D I'm glad that you enjoyed it, thanks for reading! :D

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somadanne December 28 2012, 01:56:14 UTC
Aww, this is really lovely.

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defyingnormalcy December 28 2012, 02:32:31 UTC
Thanks for reading :)

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afrakaday December 28 2012, 04:43:37 UTC
Love the pretty, and the heart-stabby drabble. I enjoy both the spoken dialogue, as well as everything that goes unsaid but is nonetheless conveyed so clearly here.

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defyingnormalcy December 28 2012, 04:44:47 UTC
Daybreak is just a bucket full o'heart-stabby! :( Glad that you enjoyed it, thank you for reading. :D

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k_d_456_345_a December 28 2012, 04:48:22 UTC
This is sweet and true to them. It is a moment I've often wondered about. I've also wondered what Bill would have done if she hadn't come to the hangar deck or if he knew she would have to come along, someway, somehow?

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defyingnormalcy December 28 2012, 05:03:15 UTC
It's a moment that I have wondered about as well, I do think that Bill would have taken the few minutes to say a proper farewell. At this point, they were very transparent about their feelings for one another in front of the crew.

Hmmm, interesting topic to raise about what Bill would have done, perhaps that could be a fic goal for you? ;)

Thanks for reading. :)

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margaux_margo May 24 2014, 06:07:20 UTC
Oh dear gods that was good. How you inspired the welling of tears in so few words is truly impressive. You know I write long comments, but I actually can't bring myself to dissect and define each part that stirred me.

Suffice it to say that although I've been binging on your Hobbs/Raydor fics, that has been a light vacation compared to the deep emotion that these two elicit. Dear gods. It's like I just rediscovered another chamber of my heart.

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defyingnormalcy May 24 2014, 13:05:05 UTC
Thank you so much, I am truly glad that you enjoyed this.

As always, your lovely feedback is so appreciated. :)

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