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[definewisdom]

Title: Breaking Point
Author: Mariana O'Connor
Character: John, Dean
Rating: G
Time frame: preseries, wee!Winchesters
Pairing: none, gen
Disclaimer: If I owned them the season would have ended completely differently. It didn't, so I don't.
Summary: John wasn't watching, and now it's too late for him to change anything

Comments

[snow_white]

He wonders how they can sleep so peacefully in the dark, knowing what is out there...this wrapped it all up for me...short and bittersweet and absolutely brilliant. Thanks for sharing!

[definewisdom]

Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. I love writing John, he's so interesting to try and understand. You know he loves his sons, but could he put them over the hunt?

[kepp0xy]

♥ ♥ poor Dean. I love how you slowly build up to John's realization- or, stating the realization for your audience. I like the subtlties. XDDD Awesome job, it made me hurt a little bit all over again for thems Winchesters...

[definewisdom]

Thank you! *pats little!Dean* he never got a chance to be a proper kid. I wanted to show John finally understanding what he was doing to him, and I'm glad you saw that.

Thanks again! Glad you liked it.

[definewisdom]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[lady_octavia]

Heartwrenchingly beautiful.

while he was out fighting one battle, he lost a war. sort of encapsulates John's life.

[bluesister]

it’s late, in so many different ways, it’s late.

Dead on, whole thing. Nice, nice, nice.