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Fic: Merlin; G-PG; Equilibrium - Chapter 1

Dec 18, 2008 19:25

Title: Equilibrium, Chapter 1
Fandom: Merlin
Rating: G-PG for eventual light romance
Word Count: This part - 4740
Pairing/Characters: Ensemble, eventual Merlin/Arthur, plus male OC sort of (he's from the original legends but hasn't turned up in the show... yet)
Disclaimer: The characters and concept of Merlin do not belong to me. I merely kidnap ( Read more... )

merlin, g, equilibrium, multi-part, merlin/arthur, fic, arthur, pg

Comments 12

aleathiel December 18 2008, 20:27:09 UTC

This is a really interesting beginning (and I'm excited to see the length of the completed fic. I've been hoping for a few more long fics!) and I'm looking forward to reading more of it. You've set it up to be very fascinating!

mariana_oconnor December 18 2008, 22:41:17 UTC

Thanks!

I've never really posted a multi-parter before, so it's good to know that it's working out so far, although it is a little daunting. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

kuhekabir December 18 2008, 20:54:36 UTC

interesting start...more?

mariana_oconnor December 18 2008, 22:42:33 UTC

Lots more... and it's all written out, so it should be posted fairly regularly as long as my Internet access remains unimpeded. I'm glad you liked it so far. Thanks!

wrennette December 18 2008, 20:56:19 UTC

i was wondering what ever happened to this!

poor silly percival...

i love your nimueh so much, she's just so much fun, the vindictive bitch.

i also love her wolf familiar, so pretty, and rather fitting.

mariana_oconnor December 18 2008, 22:44:28 UTC

Yeah, the idea of editing it more severely was a little scary, and with RL going all crazy and then the finale sort of making it a little bit AU I decided to wait a while.

He is a bit of an imbecile, but that, at least, is in keeping with the legend.

Nimueh is awesome to write. I love writing bad guys - they are so much cooler to do dialogue for.

Thanks!

rose_walker22 December 18 2008, 23:39:36 UTC

Ooh! I'm really hooked now.
What does Nimueh want? I'm guessing something to do with Merlin, but... ooh!!! And what's going to happen to Arthur if Percival is Arthur?
Yeah can't wait for more.
Loving Nimueh too ^_^

mariana_oconnor December 19 2008, 23:44:31 UTC

^_^ hooked is good, hooked is very good. I'm really glad you're liking it.

More shall be up soon, probably tomorrow.

Thanks for the comment.

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mariana_oconnor December 19 2008, 23:46:04 UTC

I am too flaky to commit to a real plot

This is my first real foray into multi chapter fic... and due to a similar concern I made sure it was all written out before hand so I didn't leave it hanging. I hate it when people do that.

I'm glad you're enjoying it, I hope you like the rest. Thanks for commenting!