Girlfriend / Boyfriend

Dec 26, 2013 01:03


Title: Girlfriend / Boyfriend (two drabbles)
Author: deepseabed
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: 15
Warnings: Nothing.
Summary: Two teenagers changing into confused young men.
Disclaimer: It's all fantasy. It happens only in my dreams.
Feedback: Anything will be loved. ♥

I'd like to say Happy Holidays ♥ to every one of you with two drabbles, although they're not ( Read more... )

belldom, fiction

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nuraicha December 25 2013, 16:42:15 UTC
Oh my god I'm so, so happy to see you posting! I love your fics! (I only read two but I already love/adore your writing!). This was incredible, I love the way you portray Dom's feeling, you have a gift in the way you write! The way you use the language it's... incredible!

I'm too shocked to properly comment. This is... wow. THE ANGST, SO MUCH ANGST AND I LOVE IT. I just want to hug Dom tightly and to slap Matt to make some sense in him! DOM IS MORE YOUR PARTNER THAN ANY OF YOUR GIRLFRIENDS WHY DON'T YOU REALISE MATT.

Now let's quote:

It's not that you're gay. It's just... Everyone knows you are special to each other. You know that yourselves, even though you might not admit it if someone tells you so. THIS. THIS IS THE TRUTH BECAUSE THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS IN REALITY (or is just my twisted mind...?)

When he looks back at you at some point, there's no way you imagine his blue irises flaring up.
It's the first time you've ever felt this unidentifiable desire rushing up your spine. LOVE THIS.

He's still as thin, but you think he's got ( ... )

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deepseabed January 2 2014, 06:27:19 UTC
Thank you so much for reading this and leaving such a lovely comment. I hope you understand how much your comment made me happy. <3

Actually, when I posted this story, I wondered if I should tag it as an angst story, but I was not sure, so I didn't...

It's really amazing to know which lines you enjoyed and what you felt about them. it means really a lot. Thank you again, and I hope you had a lovely Christmas and have a wonderful 2014. x

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zetastation December 25 2013, 20:37:05 UTC
Omg...! :O This was beautiful, amazing! Wonderful piece of work! A MASTER PIECE! Really, you have no idea how much I loved this! :O

<3

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deepseabed January 2 2014, 06:29:22 UTC
I'm really happy to know you felt that way! :D

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. <3
(Also thank you for adding me. :))

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stefanyeah December 25 2013, 21:02:08 UTC
Oh God, you've got no idea how delighted I am to see you post again. :-D

And this was so well written again. You had my sniffing away a fee years there.

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deepseabed January 2 2014, 06:33:08 UTC
Thank you so much, Stef. Your words mean a lot! <3

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blisstastic December 25 2013, 21:12:08 UTC
Simply beautiful.. Truly amazing... I'm lost for better words... I loved it..

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deepseabed January 2 2014, 06:34:27 UTC
Wow. THANK YOU. I'm so, so happy that you felt that way. :)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. <3

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howardjuice December 26 2013, 01:43:30 UTC
ah this was really beautiful! thank you :)

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deepseabed January 2 2014, 06:35:24 UTC
I'm really glad that you liked this. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. <3

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