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dawnieangel in deeplyshallowuk

MB3: Growing Up and Letting Go

Aug 18, 2008 13:59

Title: Mama’s Boy 3: Growing Up and Letting Go.
Rating: K+
Summary: She knew the day would come, when she realised he was more man than child, she just didn’t realise it’d be this soon.
Authors note: This was written for the biggest fan of this series, Susan (
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burstoflight August 19 2008, 02:47:59 UTC

I don't even know what to say. I am truly touched that you finished this in time for my birthday. I know I joked about it alot, but I was never really expecting anything. So thank you for writing the next installment in this incredible series. I really enjoyed watching Nathan, Haley, and even Lucas work together as a family. I felt bad for Jamie and I loved seeing baby Natalie.

I can't wait until the fourth one! ;)

dawnieangel August 19 2008, 18:36:45 UTC

You're very welcome! I didn't think I would get it finished, but I think I do best under deadline lol I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

As for number 4 we shall see lol I actually took out the couple of lines which would have tied into the idea I had for four so I wouldn't have the pressure haha!

Hope you had a great day!

bluelilyrose August 19 2008, 15:48:21 UTC

I love this series and I was so happy when I saw you'd posted a third part to it.

You write teenage Jamie just perfectly and you did a great job of showing his heartbreak at being dumped by his first girlfriend. I felt so sorry for him and could definitely imagine him blaming his parents for giving him such high expectations.

I adored the interaction between Nathan and Haley as well as the NH/Lucas scenes. Oh, and the part where Olivia asked for a bra? Just priceless!

Loved baby Natalie, too and hearing about how attached she is to her eldest brother. Aww!

Like Susan, I can't wait for the fourth one either. Hee!

dawnieangel August 19 2008, 18:37:59 UTC

Aw thank you Di! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was nice being able to write a teenager-teenager - a luxury in fanfiction if you ask me!

babyjamesismine August 19 2008, 15:56:01 UTC

Heeeee awww loved it Dawnie. Absolutely LMAO over the Olivia/bra stuff and Luke/Nate's reactions and just yeah..hysterical. And Lily and Jamie and little Keith and Natalie and yeah just everything...it was great! And once again I feel for Haley so much!! I think I'm going to be just like her in that regard because my mom certainly is. She still acts like I'm way younger sometimes and I'm the only child so its even tougher haha but yeah anyways loved it Dawnie! =D

dawnieangel August 19 2008, 18:38:58 UTC

Why thank you Jackie-Jackins.. (Don't ask lol)

I'm glad you liked it, and that you can uh..prematurely relate to Haley hehe

treehillover23 August 20 2008, 02:26:37 UTC

I loved it, Dawn. It was soo cute.
I was little shocked by the fact that Jamie had sex!
I still see him as that cute five year old...lol..
Natalie was adorable and Oliva wanting a bra was golden.
Great story!

dawnieangel August 28 2008, 15:11:18 UTC

Im glad you enjoyed it sweets. I know our lil baby all grown up!!!