Hawaii Five-0 fic: Family business - chapter 11/?
Chapter 1 (contains full headers and overall warnings), Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, Chapter 10
Pairing: Danny/Steve.
Rating / Warnings: NC-17 for explicit sexual content (at last!). Includes non-graphic references to off-screen violence, including canonical character death; there's also ( Read more... )
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So really great chapter. I felt so sad for Steve when he left Danny at his apartment. I was thinking to myself Steve should not be alone! I know Danny/Grace time is sacred. I think Danny should have kept the 2 separate but still cried a little inside for Steve having to be alone. Glad he wasn't alone long. Yeah for Danny's convictions and sticking to them in the face of all that gorgeousness. Oh and then the beautiful hot sex!!!! *sigh* So nice. You are the best.
Off to read your new stories. Yeah for sequels!!!!!!!!
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First of all the posting time of this was perfect!! I was just back home after a grueling 12 hours day in the college with about 6 hours of sleep in previous 72 hours!! I was physically and emotionally drained but then I saw this and your comment on the previous chapter and I got a sudden adrenalin rush!!
The tease about Danny wearing Steve clothes and them not fitting then KISSING, then actually wearing them THEN THE SEX and just a;sdjkfn;klasdnf;akdnsgaibrgkdaflkmsl!!!!!!
I just love you so much right now xD
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What bliss!! I have recently started a demanding new job and have been unable to visit my LJ ficlist for ages. Imagine my delight when today, finally having time to read, I find your updates.
I have just read through from Chapter 5, and the cherry on the top was the first!time at the end.
Look forward to Steve demonstrating his 'stamina' to Danny at his earliest convenience!!
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i freakin exited, and i can not wait for them to 'explore' this relationship further... i really liked the level of buildup so far, the sexual/personal tension was just right and then it all just exploded into, well, that... it was amazing!
also, that "youre the quarterback, you call the shots" line was epic, i completely want to steal it and use it irl...lol
so am i correct in assuming steve listened to the interogation tapes and heard what Hesse said about Dannys crush and thats what brought this on? because he never said anything about it but im assuming thats what happened, or does that tape factor in later? either way, amazing job and i look forward to the next part as always!
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