Hawaii Five-0 fic: Family business - chapter 8/?

[deepbluemermaid]

Chapter 1 (contains full headers and overall warnings), Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7

Rating / Warnings: R for non-graphic violence. Trigger warning for references to intimate partner homicide cases handled by HPD.

Pairings: Danny/Steve (pre-slash), Kono/Chin, Danny/OFC.

Word count: 4,000 words for this

Comments

[simplyn2deep]

another fast paced chapter. almost as fast as it seems to go on the show

[deepbluemermaid]

Thanks! I decided to speed things up a little, since a whole month of Danny pining for Steve would have been too depressing (and boring).

[ariadne83]

Oh Steve, you are so very incredibly bad at hiding your feelings. And yet you have zero right to give Danny the side-eye.

Oh BOYS

[deepbluemermaid]

I bet Steve thinks he has the world's best poker face. And hey, maybe he does when it comes to facing off against shoe-bombers. With Danny, not so much...

[azziria]

Loving this - but I want all of it *now*!

*cracks whip*

Write, damnit!

[deepbluemermaid]

Heh, I think you're channelling domme!Kono a leetle too much there...there'll be at least 11 chapters, and I have to sleep sometime.

[azziria]

Sleep is over-rated...

[finduilas_clln]

AKSJDLKAEHLJ! *makes grabby hands* I want mooooooooooooooooooore! I love this story so much, I really should've waited to read it until it was all done. LOL. Now I'm always yelling out "No! Just a little bit mire, please!" whenever the end of the chapter is there. :)

Awesome. Love it! Can't wait for more!

[deepbluemermaid]

Hee! Yeah, I'm terribly impatient at reading other people's WIPs. I'm quite surprised how many people are willing to stick with me along the way, but very grateful. I really think I write better - and definitely write faster - when I know there are people eagerly awaiting the next update.

So thank you - your comments make a difference :)

[finduilas_clln]

I can never help myself! I wish I had the patience to wait until the fic was done, but I read the summary when you posted the first chapter and I was so intrigued I just had to read it!!!

Oh yes, I am definitely eagerly awaiting! So go write. ;) No seriously, I get so excited when I see a new chapter pop up! It makes my day and I always rush to read it!

And I said it before, but I'll say it again. I really like the pace you got going on. It just makes me wanting more and more! And every time there's a scene with Steve and Danny in it together, I wibble and get so excited at what might happen! :D

[antivol]

This was great! The "pineapple infested hellhole" slip from Danny was hilarious - not everyone can deal with Danny's temper as Steve does! I wonder how long Steve is going to hold on his decision, seeing as he was jealous here... Thanks for a great chapter!

[deepbluemermaid]

Thank you! I thought getting Reyes' reaction to one of Danny's anti-Hawaii rants would be interesting, and I just couldn't go past that classic line.