Hawaii Five-0 fic: Family business - chapter 6/?

[deepbluemermaid]

Chapter 1 (contains full headers and warnings)
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

Rating / Warnings: PG-13 for language and angst. No content warnings apply.
Word count: 4,200 words for this chapter; 26,000 words so far.
Author's note: Thanks for your patience, everyone! Chapter 7 is almost finished, so there shouldn't be such a long wait

Comments

[elrhiarhodan]

I've been missing this - thank you for the new chapter. I love the UST (don't I always) and I love how Danny is delicately planting seeds with Gracie.

Beautiful! Can't wait for the next chapter.

[deepbluemermaid]

Yeah, RL has been rather demanding recently, but chapter 7 should be up in days rather than weeks. And I think this story will set a new UST record for me...they'll get there in the end, of course, because I don't write unhappy endings :)

[kitmerlot1213]

A lovely update!

I like that Danny is winning over his fellow detectives and that their giving him a chance. I also like the Danno/Grace relationship and especially how much--for good and for bad--she listens to him and takes everything in that he says. And yes there are good people who live in Philly (and the suburbs)--thanks, Danny :):)

I like that Danny's mom knows the truth that Winston is Danny's biodad and that he might never have known she was pregnant and I really liked Danny's reaction to visiting his grave and the graves of his other McGarrett relatives.

Lastly, I like how you're showing that Steve's reacting to Danny but that Danny can't quite figure out Steve's true feelings so I give Danny credit for wanting to tell Steve how he feels about him.

Continued excellent work on this fic :)

[deepbluemermaid]

Heh, I'm glad I didn't offend Philly folks too much! I just couldn't resist that joke.

I'm glad it's coming across that Danny's presence definitely has an effect on Steve. All will become clear in the next chapter...

[aussiejo]

I've been missing it too. And it was a great chapter. Looking forward to more.

[deepbluemermaid]

Thanks so much!

[finduilas_clln]

As always, I love this so much!!!!

[deepbluemermaid]

I'm delighted to hear that, thank you :)

[veejean45]

What a great way to start the month! Great update--I loved the scene at the cemetery--and can't wait for the next chapter!

[deepbluemermaid]

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the cemetery scene, because I had mixed feelings about how well that turned out. I'm hoping to have chapter 7 up by the end of the weekend :)