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jimpage363 January 3 2012, 04:42:39 UTC
Nice. I liked the mix of pain and comfort that Steve's life encapsulates now, especially in that epilogue.

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deepbluemermaid January 3 2012, 11:55:28 UTC
Yeah, I wanted this to be at least somewhat realistic, in terms of chronic pain and combat trauma. Steve will always have those things to cope with, even if he and Danny are in love and happy together and even if he has a great 'ohana around him.

Thanks for commenting - I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

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cold_shuga January 3 2012, 08:25:41 UTC
i really enjoyed this fic. it was a lovely little AU as well as being a well rounded story. thank you

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deepbluemermaid January 3 2012, 11:57:03 UTC
Thank you very much! This really was the little commentfic that grew beyond all my expectations, so I'm glad it worked as a coherent and well-rounded whole :)

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vamysteryfan January 3 2012, 16:00:29 UTC
What a great epilogue! I loved the story all the way through.

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deepbluemermaid January 3 2012, 20:31:48 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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t_verano January 3 2012, 18:27:36 UTC
I really enjoyed this AU; it has such a nice feel with the dailyness of it and with Steven and Danny's coming together through Grace (and chemistry :-)). I also really liked having the harder edge of the epilogue to see a little more of what Steve went through, which still shapes his life in some ways. Thank you for all the pleasure this fic brought me!

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deepbluemermaid January 4 2012, 09:56:47 UTC
Thank you for this lovely feedback :)

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taste_is_sweet January 4 2012, 02:45:20 UTC
Lovely, gentle, sweet story. Thank you.

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deepbluemermaid January 4 2012, 09:57:38 UTC
Thanks! I'd been writing lots of angst and porn, so this was a nice palate cleanser for me :)

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