Rinse (B2ST)

Jul 23, 2011 23:53


Rinse
Doojoon/Kikwang || R || Romance
Because the thought of Doojoon and Kikwang sharing the shower isn't dirty at all.
Theme: 2/100

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sven2ity July 24 2011, 05:01:20 UTC
OH BWAHAHAHA NOW I CAN COMMENT

This mad me lull SO HARD in the beginning and then in the middle it was like OMGOMGOMG and then at the end it was the perfect awwwwwww moment that just made my heart turn to putty and it was so well written and you have such nice vocabulary and sentance structure and UGH I ENVY OTL

http://myfacewhen.com/212/ <---- the expression on my face was this, the whole time

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decodexx July 24 2011, 05:40:41 UTC
LOL THAT PICTURE. It will remain in my head forever and ever.

But thank you, thank you. This is nothing compared to your Dookwang story. DD: I'm glad you liked it. ^^

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sven2ity July 24 2011, 06:13:25 UTC
PFFF DON'T YOU DARE TRY TO BE MODEST AND TALK DOWN THIS BEAUTIFUL WORK OF--- ahem, I mean, you write so well, you are definitely just as good, if not *coughyousodefinitelyarecough* better than me D:

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decodexx July 24 2011, 18:21:34 UTC
lmao, you are too kind really. ;A;

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tasha omgggggggggg stigiophobiax July 24 2011, 12:25:40 UTC
oh my GOD
um so can i just die now or
how did you know bath smut is my fave smut ahdfajbfas
'Me taking a shower with my group mate in a small shower, and I'm scrubbing his back. There's nothing wrong with that at all.'
yeah ok doojoon nothing weird about that at all lol 8)
but das ok b/c kikwang seems to enjoy himself odafiasofasf
'His hand gripped Kikwang's ass'
jHASDBGHVDBAGHVBdhasdbahjbdHJBDabdhjbbashjbdhBHJSBADHJAJDA
fucking this is where i lost it omg
when i read smut i don't get all sexual i just get all flaily and fangirly is that odd
but yeah here i started flailing like i needed to be locked up lol OTL
and it just got better from there :Q__________
o + this icon makes things awk b/c now it seems like yoseob wants to watch his band mates bump uglies :3
CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT FIC OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK <3333

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Re: tasha omgggggggggg decodexx July 24 2011, 18:19:04 UTC
bath smut is one of my favorites too. ;3

lmfao i get fangirly with smut too. <3

glad you liked it. :)

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weerainbow July 24 2011, 15:28:13 UTC
This was such a fun mix of emotions ^^ I love their competitive spirit coming out in the beginning, Doojoon making sure he got the shower before Kikwang hehe. And the progression as the story went on through awkwardness and playfulness to the tension building between them. I loved that Doojoon was the first to make a move but then Kikwang responded with even more fire, in turn making Doojoon want more ;o)
Another thing I loved about this was how tenderly Doojoon acted towards Kikwang once they got out of the shower, bravely admitting to having feelings for him for a long time but not putting pressure on him. It was so sweet. And the ending was very cute...and cheeky just like the two boys!! ^^

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decodexx July 24 2011, 18:20:03 UTC
thank you! glad you liked it. ^^

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cassiobeauty July 25 2011, 14:39:17 UTC
omgggggggggggggg hoooooooooooooooooooooot uhave to do the actua "dirty shower 2 " xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD omo i cant get the last part

"Yes, on one condition." Kikwang smirked as he pushed Doojoon to the wall, raising an eyebrow and signaling the obvious.

Doojoon chuckled, pulling the younger male even closer. "I can definitely agree to that."thats mean dujun like uke? O///o

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decodexx July 29 2011, 17:18:55 UTC
hahahah i'm glad you liked it. and i guess that does make Doojoon uke in this fic. ;)

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snb123 July 26 2011, 07:35:15 UTC
This pairing doesn't get enough love!! Thanks for writing this! I totally loved it!

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decodexx July 29 2011, 17:10:33 UTC
i'm glad you liked it. ^^

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