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⇋1 - plumage

Sep 04, 2009 21:35

Title: Plumage
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Rating and Warnings: G
Characters: Russia
Word Count: 340. It's impossible to crop though, but I can try if prodded.
Notes: Written for ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

atlikarinca September 4 2009, 11:44:56 UTC

oh my god oh my god i love your russia in this. That one line of his, like, cinched his character.

just. oh man the imagery in this is SO NICE. but yes i think you must add more about the firebird fairytale because i don't think the unknowing would know what it's about, hahah. OTHER THAN THAT I THINK IT'S SO COOOOL.

etherful September 4 2009, 11:51:22 UTC

THE NOTES WILL BE MY STORY.

HMM I THINK I HAVE AN IDEA but I think it'll only be making reference to the fairytale itself. It's so hard to write an actual fairytale with it. Bahhhh, this prompt is awesome but braineating.

miss_aztec57 September 4 2009, 12:57:27 UTC

I know about the story of the Firebird! I think I read a book somewhere....
That was really lovely. Your description is so beautiful, it captures the scene so perfectly. Loved it. :D

etherful September 5 2009, 01:11:23 UTC

I heard the movement from the Stravinsky played at a concert, and it just sparked an interest. Maybe you heard about the Ballet? Or the music?
Thank you very much! :D

bavarois September 4 2009, 21:48:48 UTC

i see we had similar thoughts for this week's contest! haha. oh ivan. for whatever reason, i think that his relationship with his fairtales is something that is interesting to explore. and i like the addition of the russian! i can never find russian words that aren't in cyrillic so my fics always end up staying boring and un-fancy. oh well. great job! :D