Under the Dust

[december21st]

“Under the Dust”

By December21st

Fandom: Haven

Rating: PG

Pairing: None

Beta: A load of thanks go to the betariffic lone_pyramid. In addition to many corrections and suggestions, she was willing to be confused, and to tell me that it was all my fault. It was. Any additional faults in the story are mine and mine alone

Comments

[lone_pyramid]

Hey now, I don't recall ever saying it was all your fault... just that some parts were very confusing. :p~

I like the final changes you made, where Audrey starts to figure out what's going on. It's more concrete without losing its ethereal/dreamlike sense established by the rest of the fic.

[december21st]

Thank you!

I still really appreciate all the hard work you put into this one particularly.

You'll have to let me beta something in return.

[lone_pyramid]

No worries! It's what I'm paid to do.

...waitaminute.

I started a short Haven fic on Monday, hoping to have it done before the premiere tonight, but it turned rather exposition-y and not so great and so I haven't been able to finish it. :( Ah well. Something else will occur to me.

[kasiopeia]

I loved this <3 The way Audrey discover her memories is great, and I like the idea of a museum with all the clues to her past. :)

for a moment she's not sure if she means the contents of the building or the entire world, hiding under a blurry surface like a placid lake with unfathomable depths.

I just love this line. It's perfect and lovely and sets the mood for the rest of the fic ^^

[december21st]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.