Just A Drabble

Sep 14, 2012 22:02

I had a day working in clinic today and had an hour at lunch when it was quiet, but I had to sit at the desk - so thought i would use my time creatively. In the end I don't know whether I am happy with how it turned out - What do you think.

Joyce POV, as she watches Spike comforting Buffy in "Fool for Love."
100 words.
Un beta'd - so any mistakes, ( Read more... )

btvs, fan fic, season 4, drabble, joyce

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lifefailsme September 15 2012, 08:28:14 UTC
I like this, it's a good insight into the situation. Creative attempt justified by good results X-D

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debris4spike September 16 2012, 17:26:21 UTC
Thanks Jamie - it didn't quite go as I wanted it to, but nice to keep the brain working.

Joyce was a lovely character, wasn't she?

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lifefailsme September 17 2012, 08:02:00 UTC
Joyce was terrific, it was so sad when she died cos I thought she brought something to the show that it lacked without her. Even just a background character with few lines.

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debris4spike September 18 2012, 18:03:14 UTC
That's one thing, that for me makes a great series ... even the minor characters are people. joyce was lovely, but sadly underused by Joss.

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missus_grace September 15 2012, 13:17:48 UTC
Awww.

Poor Joyce was just becoming fully realized as a character when they offed her. No room for adults in the Buffyverse!

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debris4spike September 16 2012, 17:27:03 UTC
Thanks Grace - it didn't quite go as I wanted it to, but nice to keep the brain working.

Joyce was a lovely character, wasn't she? And, yes, so sad to kill her off like that.

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kudagirl September 15 2012, 22:22:44 UTC
*Sob* Joyce. Just when she was finally understanding Buffy, Joss killed her off. *shakes fist at Joss*

None of us end up where we thought we would when we started out. Life trips us up and shoves us where it wants us to go. It how we decide to deal with it that makes or breaks us.

Nice drabble. Could there be more in the near future?

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debris4spike September 16 2012, 20:26:56 UTC
Thanks Kuda - it didn't quite go as I wanted it to, but nice to keep the brain working. I really want to get back into the writing - and I have a few thoughts on a couple of fics ... so I must get focussed. I find trying to focus on the 100 words hard, especially when I read your work!

Joyce was a lovely character, wasn't she? And, yes, so sad to kill her off like that. I would love to have seen more of her and Giles.

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kudagirl September 16 2012, 21:14:40 UTC
I totally ship Joyce and Giles. I hated that they were so awkward with each other after Band Candy. I watched an episode today that was just after Joyce's death and Gile was listening to the same record they listened to in Band Candy. It was his moment to grieve for her.

I love that icon you used on your reply. I think he would have totally read fan fiction and enjoyed writing Spuffy.

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debris4spike September 17 2012, 07:25:19 UTC
That was so sad after Band Candy .. I really must get on with a fic I started last year, now ... ;)

Have you read the Spuffy fic where Spike stumbles across Spuffy fan fic on the internet? Can't remember it's name, but it's a good (and fun) story

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