Comments | debbiel66: Fic: Plan C

debbiel66

Fic: Plan C

Jan 08, 2012 11:32

Title: Plan C
Word Count: 5800
Rating: R (language)
Characters: Dean, Sam
Genre: gen, h/c, hurt!Sam, hurt!Dean
Warnings: refers to events up through 7X11.

Author's Notes: This is based on the following commentfic prompt on ohsam: Sam has food poisoning. Dean's trying to take care of him, but Sam keeps seeing Lucifer telling him that Dean's the ( Read more... )

h/c, ohsam, fic, supernatural

Comments 84

klutzy_girl January 8 2012, 19:55:40 UTC

Aww, this was so sad, but so so good. I loved it! Poor boys.

debbiel66 January 9 2012, 02:33:58 UTC

Aw, thanks! This was actually the happier version. :-)

Thanks so much for reading!

katsheswims January 8 2012, 19:57:01 UTC

So sad...

debbiel66 January 9 2012, 02:34:31 UTC

I'm kind of smiling because this version was actually happier than my first.

Thank you so much for reading! :-)

callistosh65 January 8 2012, 20:10:49 UTC

“For the spinach,” Sam finished and almost smiled.

It was ridiculous-what Dean would do for that smile.

You at your very best, my dear. A lovely slice of whump and comfort - and that ending is brilliant.

debbiel66 January 9 2012, 02:35:27 UTC

Thank you so very, very much for all your suggestions. Every one of them was spot-on.

Aren't we lucky to have such lovely source material to work from? ♥

auntmo9 January 8 2012, 20:15:29 UTC

Oh, poor boys. And at least Dean tried, on his own, to grieve.

debbiel66 January 9 2012, 02:36:37 UTC

The last episode sort of broke me...in my own weird way, I think I saw this as the boys on the upswing. Only on Supernatural....

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :-)

auntmo9 January 9 2012, 02:48:30 UTC

I find it can be the smallest, strangest things that can break us sometimes, and often when we least expect it.

debbiel66 January 9 2012, 03:00:57 UTC

Very true! I think I really was still in denial about Bobby, and seeing it confirmed made the episode before break hit me that much harder.

dont_hate_me01 January 8 2012, 20:30:32 UTC

The end had me in tears, Dean is so completely devistated about Bobby's death, he's really taking it hard!

Glad that both the boys are okay, it was really touch and go there for both Sam and Dean, the moral of this story... stay away from spinach!!

Great fic, thanks for sharing!

debbiel66 January 9 2012, 02:37:43 UTC

Definitely the moral of the story! It always kills me how the worst outbreaks seem to be tied to the most innocuous food products.

Thank you so much for reading - I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :-)