Fic: The Ones Who Got Away

[debbiel66]

Title: The Ones Who Got Away
Author: debbiel66
Characters: John, Bobby
Word Count: 5100
Genre: gen
Rating: R (language)
Warnings: Spoilers through “The Girl Next Door”; however, the story goes AU from canon from Season 6X16.
Author's Notes: This story follows Onstermay, Clean Slate, Killing Time, and Backseat Driver in my resurrected!John verse

Comments

[harrigan]

Yay! You're writing! I love fic where characters discover something new about other characters, so this verse is always a treat for that reason! Plus a POV character we almost never get to experience!

As always, your prose is a carefully crafted pleasure to read! ♥

[debbiel66]

Aw, thanks so much! Believe me...it felt good to actually write again. It's so hard once you get out of the habit.

Thank you so much for reading! ♥

The Ones Who Got Away

[catsintheattic]

It was interesting to see the events through John's eyes. But most of all, I loved Bobby's voice in this - pitch perfect!

Re: The Ones Who Got Away

[debbiel66]

I am thrilled Bobby's voice worked for you. I felt like I was struggling to find his voice this one, and usually, I can just hear him in my head. Thank you so much for reading!

[klutzy_girl]

Yes, I love this 'verse and I'm so glad there's an update.

I wanted him to find out about Adam, but I didn't want John abandoning Sam and Dean! Moron. I hope the boys forgive him, even though he doesn't deserve another chance.

Can't wait for more!

[debbiel66]

I'm so thrilled that anyone even remembers this verse in the first place - I thought I'd waiting too long. It's definitely motivational - thank you! ♥

[geckoholic]

YAY MORE!! :D

Also, Bobby. The whole scene between them was great, because from their own POV they're both right.

Great job, and again I hope for more! *gg*

[debbiel66]

I'm seriously tickled anyone remembers my verse, let alone wants more. And I'm glad it felt balanced to you...I love both characters, and I was trying to be fair. When it comes down to it, all these characters are idiots when it comes to each other.

[purplehrdwonder]

Eeee, more of this 'verse! I'm glad John found out about Adam--and I love the way that reveal was worked into the end of season 6 canon with Cas wanting to keep John out of the picture. And Bobby at the end, looking after his boys in a way John doesn't quite get... beautiful.

Hope you're inspired to do more~

[debbiel66]

Yay, I'm just thrilled you liked it! And that you remember the verse, even though it's been so long. It was tricky integrating season 6 canon - I had to keep going back and checking the timeline. And I'm also glad the Bobby parts worked. Thank you so much for reading!