Concepts in this books are good, but the author simply lacks skill and finesse to make them work for her. this is why all her other pseudos and stories failed and she had to go back to hp and write a whole prequel- that makes the hp verse have even less sense- its the only way she can make any money of writing. and what blows my mind is how many fans of her would defend her mediocre writing. she is simply NOT a good author, and her grammar is not always on point.
i also agree with the friendship-point of the trio you made: i never got why they would befriend hermione, or even for the matter why hermione would befriend them, it makes no sense; and never to mention that hermione comes across as one of the biggest mary sues ever.
but thank you for this amazing read through and the summery! this was really a nice travel to take with you- will you be doing the other books too, or have you enough after the first one? (because book 2 and even more book 4 is just a mess and all over the place)
hermione/ron makes no sense- she would abuse him so, so much and he would let her because he has no confidence of his own- that relationship is doomed; in a way hermione has a lot in common with umbridge just that umbridge was on the wrong side
yay for more of your entertaining and thorough analysis- and i would not worry so much about HBP there is GoF before that and that book was just... it was but yay for more, and maybe we can motivate you to give them all a go, and tear jkr apart when she deserves it!
this is why all her other pseudos and stories failed and she had to go back to hp and write a whole prequel- that makes the hp verse have even less sense- its the only way she can make any money of writing. and what blows my mind is how many fans of her would defend her mediocre writing. she is simply NOT a good author, and her grammar is not always on point.
i also agree with the friendship-point of the trio you made: i never got why they would befriend hermione, or even for the matter why hermione would befriend them, it makes no sense; and never to mention that hermione comes across as one of the biggest mary sues ever.
but thank you for this amazing read through and the summery! this was really a nice travel to take with you- will you be doing the other books too, or have you enough after the first one? (because book 2 and even more book 4 is just a mess and all over the place)
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yay for more of your entertaining and thorough analysis- and i would not worry so much about HBP there is GoF before that and that book was just... it was
but yay for more, and maybe we can motivate you to give them all a go, and tear jkr apart when she deserves it!
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