Inheritance

Nov 17, 2011 16:33

[action, Makeout Point]
[She stands alone at the highest point of the peak, where the rock face descends into a sheer, steep cliff.  Her gaze is drawn downwards, towards a sight that only she can see.  Down into the tragedy of her past and the wreckage that had changed her life forever.]

Alright.  I'll humor you.  What do you want me to say?  That ( Read more... )

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likescats November 17 2011, 21:56:45 UTC
[Just following her up the hill.]

SUSAN.

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deaths_heritor November 17 2011, 22:01:39 UTC
...Hello, Grandfather.

[Susan hardly spares him a glance as she menaces the extremely dangerous and highly unfortunate... tree.]

Do you see him, too? It's quite gruesome, isn't it?

[For in Susan's vision... the remains of her father are long-rotting, bloodied, and altogether horrifying.]

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likescats November 17 2011, 22:44:36 UTC
[Just....quietly walks over. And looks over at the tree gravely]

...YES.

TELL ME SUSAN. WHAT DO YOU SEE?

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deaths_heritor November 18 2011, 01:59:44 UTC
...What, is it much different for you? The carriage is down below if you take a look. That, I'm assuming, is supposed to be F --

Do you think you could shut up for a moment? Thanks.

That is your erstwhile apprentice.

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jaws5sonofjaws November 17 2011, 22:05:56 UTC
[Mart just stand back and watches. He thought he saw his scary teacher walking up here, but not sure why... obviously now it's to go crazy...]

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deaths_heritor November 17 2011, 22:10:01 UTC
[...In a horror movie, this would be the moment the screeching chord plays as Susan's head suddenly and sharply turns towards her student. Her eyes narrow.]

Ah.

I was wondering when you would join us, Mother.

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jaws5sonofjaws November 17 2011, 22:11:22 UTC
[Okay that actually did kinda freak him out a bit.]

Uhm, I was just seeing what you were doing up here

with the sword.

And I ain't your mom...

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deaths_heritor November 17 2011, 22:15:10 UTC
No. You aren't.

[Susan agrees as she takes a step forward, her eyes darting between her father (apparently a tree) and Mart.]

I don't appreciate my past being drudged up. How did the town even find out about this?

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deaths_heritor November 18 2011, 02:03:29 UTC
[Susan, somehow, seems to be carrying on a different conversation.]

As if I could be upset by this. If you know what happened to them, you know what happened to me afterwards, too.

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deaths_heritor November 19 2011, 01:28:54 UTC
[The expression on her face goes from contemptuously calm to something of irritation.]

That's all you have to say? Did you want me to describe the obvious?

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If this is not okay, just let me know! hintcoinplz November 17 2011, 23:55:06 UTC
[Hey there not!mom, one of your not!kids has had quite the adventure in death puzzle land. And now he's made his way here on his journey to find the Professor. To him, Makeut Point now resembles an industrial wasteland, with buzzing saws and dangerous-looking electrical cords laying around.

And then he sees her, and looks a little confused and worried. But as he can't speak to get her attention, he just watches anxiously instead.]

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Totally fine! deaths_heritor November 18 2011, 02:05:55 UTC
...Imp?

[As Luke walks onto the scene, Susan stares at him in some mixture of surprise and disgust.]

Acute embarrassment is hardly anything to be concerned about. Go away, Imp.

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hintcoinplz November 18 2011, 03:44:17 UTC
[Luke looks confused for a moment, before shaking his head.

"I'm Luke" ...is what he'd like to say, but he can only mouth the words. Much to his irritation, he hasn't been able to talk to anyone all day.

And then he has an idea, as he goes off to fetch a stick nearby. He'll write his name in the dirt and look up at her expectantly.]

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deaths_heritor November 18 2011, 03:46:42 UTC
What?! No! ...I was sixteen years old, don't be ridiculous! I just lost my head for a bit.

[Susan, for some reason, looks repulsed. ...This may be because she sees the words 'Marry Me'.]

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motheringnation November 18 2011, 02:12:12 UTC
[Ukraine had been out for a walk when she saw...]

.....Susan?

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deaths_heritor November 18 2011, 02:28:31 UTC
And I would much prefer it if you would stop talking now.

[And Susan advances.]

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motheringnation November 18 2011, 02:33:53 UTC
......Susan?

[A-are you advancing towards her? Because you have a sword. She's just going to step over here.....away from the sword.]

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deaths_heritor November 18 2011, 03:01:47 UTC
[And she's just going to take another step forward.]

If you really want to goad me... you should really try turning into Slugger's dead body instead.

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