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novindalf in deathbydrabbles

In This Sweet Surrender

Nov 28, 2011 23:15

Title: In This Sweet Surrender
Rating: R (semi-explicit sex)
Word count: 470 words
Characters/Pairings: Guy, Marian; Guy/Marian
Prompt: Guy/Marian; breath
Summary: He discovered long ago just how ticklish Lady Gisborne is.
Notes: I cannot believe I have just written this, but it seems that once you’ve been bitten by the smut-bug, you’re never going back ( Read more... )

rating: r, char: marian, pair: guy/marian, #rh_drabblefest 2011, *not technically a drabble, char: guy

Comments 5

the_silverdoe November 28 2011, 23:54:32 UTC

My God Nia, couldn't believe it when I saw the rating; this was hot! =P (Could probably get away with a 'R' rating though, imo)

Also definitely admire you for being brave enough to write smut! I just run away from it. ;)

novindalf November 29 2011, 00:00:00 UTC

I thought R was the more steamy of the two ratings? *is confused*

Just looked it up, and nope, you're right. I do think my other smut-fic does deserve its rating though, so I'll just change this one.

And thank you! I have been bricking it about posting these two (I usually run away from it too =P) so I'm glad it paid off!

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novindalf November 29 2011, 11:35:26 UTC

I love how you say that like it's a crime... =P

But yes, I did. EEK.

piphilosophy December 21 2011, 07:46:52 UTC

This was beautifully executed, more erotic than smutty. I always think the implied is mightier than the explicit. Loved it!

novindalf December 21 2011, 12:11:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm rather glad that's your reaction, because I'm still very iffy about posting smut. Erotific I can handle =D